After coming to terms with being a "Forever Foal", Spike has come to the conclusion that this is a secret he must carry to his grave. Will Spike be successful or will he be caught?
Wow! Definitely wasn't expecting the next story so soon. It certainly picks up where we left off, too. :)
So this part of the saga happens during Season 4? I do like how you are making a timeline within the canon story that would work out for how Spike's desires in this area would evolve.
Something worth noting is how Spike, after the whole thing with Tirek, would be very traumatized over almost losing his 'mother figure'. Twilight, being who she is, may not have thought too much on how scary it was for Spike to have almost lost her as a result of the Tirek battle. This could easily have plunged him deeper into wanting to fulfill his 'Foal Fix' as a result of growing insecurity over his feelings about Twilight along with believing he is more like an employee than a son / friend to her.
That 'eagerness' also makes a lot of sense during the more confusing times of coping with a diaper fetish. You accept the usual neglect as it gives you time to indulge in something you feel you have a lot more control over. Spike is stressed, knows Twilight is leaving without him, again, and how he is treated like a third wheell even if he does come along. Knowing he controls his 'little time' is a great thing when you feel you don't have any say in the time and attention you really want. However, as noted in the chapter, it makes him a tad careless. This will definitely not do well for him as twilight is very perceptive and will eventually try to investigate.
The nice part is the way you are spanning time. The time these stories is taking place is allowing a lot of emotions to build for Spike. When a confrontation does happen it will be quite intense with Twilight having disbelief and frustration while Spike is finally forced to unload months, if not years, of emotional baggage he has been carrying that only being 'foalish' has allowed him to comfort.
8780993 Thanks for positive response! I saw dislikes literally SECONDS after I published this story so it's nice to see a bit of love. While I am slightly disappointed by the like to dislike ratio, I don't plan on giving up. I will see this story to the end so long as I myself enjoy my stories.
I did want a bit of a connection to the timeline in the show since I figured I could use that time as a way to mature Spike as a character while giving him a chance to "regress" with the time that has passed.
I actually didn't even think about how Spike would've felt about such a scary situation both Twilight and himself had been forced into. I will try to remember to mention that in a future chapter at some point. Thanks for mentioning this!
I've actually been really excited to start the next chapter as well as get back into the "Spike paranoia" scenes. I'll get a chance to make Spike take risks while also trying to be as careful as possible considering his circumstances. In fact, I'm so excited that I've already got the next chapter planned out, possibly the chapter after that as well. If I'm lucky, the next chapter(s) might even come out today and tomorrow depending on how much time I have.
Wow! Definitely wasn't expecting the next story so soon. It certainly picks up where we left off, too. :)
So this part of the saga happens during Season 4? I do like how you are making a timeline within the canon story that would work out for how Spike's desires in this area would evolve.
Something worth noting is how Spike, after the whole thing with Tirek, would be very traumatized over almost losing his 'mother figure'. Twilight, being who she is, may not have thought too much on how scary it was for Spike to have almost lost her as a result of the Tirek battle. This could easily have plunged him deeper into wanting to fulfill his 'Foal Fix' as a result of growing insecurity over his feelings about Twilight along with believing he is more like an employee than a son / friend to her.
That 'eagerness' also makes a lot of sense during the more confusing times of coping with a diaper fetish. You accept the usual neglect as it gives you time to indulge in something you feel you have a lot more control over. Spike is stressed, knows Twilight is leaving without him, again, and how he is treated like a third wheell even if he does come along. Knowing he controls his 'little time' is a great thing when you feel you don't have any say in the time and attention you really want. However, as noted in the chapter, it makes him a tad careless. This will definitely not do well for him as twilight is very perceptive and will eventually try to investigate.
The nice part is the way you are spanning time. The time these stories is taking place is allowing a lot of emotions to build for Spike. When a confrontation does happen it will be quite intense with Twilight having disbelief and frustration while Spike is finally forced to unload months, if not years, of emotional baggage he has been carrying that only being 'foalish' has allowed him to comfort.
Great first chapter! Here's to the rest! :)
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Thanks for positive response!
I saw dislikes literally SECONDS after I published this story so it's nice to see a bit of love. While I am slightly disappointed by the like to dislike ratio, I don't plan on giving up. I will see this story to the end so long as I myself enjoy my stories.
I did want a bit of a connection to the timeline in the show since I figured I could use that time as a way to mature Spike as a character while giving him a chance to "regress" with the time that has passed.
I actually didn't even think about how Spike would've felt about such a scary situation both Twilight and himself had been forced into. I will try to remember to mention that in a future chapter at some point. Thanks for mentioning this!
I've actually been really excited to start the next chapter as well as get back into the "Spike paranoia" scenes. I'll get a chance to make Spike take risks while also trying to be as careful as possible considering his circumstances. In fact, I'm so excited that I've already got the next chapter planned out, possibly the chapter after that as well. If I'm lucky, the next chapter(s) might even come out today and tomorrow depending on how much time I have.
Twilight doesn't have a black mane.
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Whoops, nice catch there. I have no idea why I said black mane lol!