Glad to see this back. the first two chapters were a good hook that ended up going nowhere and was kinda upsetting. Good to see you alive once more to capitalize on it!
Glad to see you're still working on this :) It's a little weird using past-tense (he had done something) to describe a current action, but I guess that's just the writing style. Loving the story; it's unique with just a hint of something sinister, and the sexy-humor bits were spot on.
9822724 To be honest I was hesitant writing this chapter that's why it took so long because I felt it was unecessary at first and just wanted it short, but it just snowballed into this and so far I'm glad people like it.
Who knew binge reading 3 chapters would be hard work, but it was worth it. Very curious to see where you going to take this story as we see, what the meaning behind those nightmare Spike has and what is the secret that Celestia and Luna have been hiding from him
10166106 It will, we are just swamped by other projects that we hardly put any time writing it at the moment. For now we're making a chapter that's a two parter. And let's just say, you'll see why the princesses were being secretive to Spike.
10175057 Also if you're talking about me, it wasn't broken. Turns out I just had to use the troubleshoot tool to get a WiFi connection again. God I suck with computers.
“I can’t help that if I like big parties.” Pinkie replied with a pout. I have a severe problem with people who can’t follow even the simple of request and put their interests before others. Crossing others privacy and not respecting boundaries or putting your wishes before the wishes of others is very serious in life and can get you in a lot of trouble, cost you your job, and your relationships. I know of someone who suffers from depression and while i don’t agree with them i respect their wish not to celebrate occasions centralized on them like their birthday. pinkie can’t seem to understand or respect the concept of boundaries or the fact the others don’t share the same personal interests as she does .
Glad to see the update and I can't wait to see what comes next.
Good chapter. Spike's gonna have to see a psychiatrist for that nosebleed issue. :P
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Great to see this updated. Its such a great story. Hopefully the next chapter doesn't take as long.
i really enjoyed that chapter and like some one else said i hope the next one doesn't take as long.
Glad to see this back. the first two chapters were a good hook that ended up going nowhere and was kinda upsetting. Good to see you alive once more to capitalize on it!
What is so important about that Amulet Rainbow has?
I want a piece of that cake!
Glad to see you're still working on this :) It's a little weird using past-tense (he had done something) to describe a current action, but I guess that's just the writing style. Loving the story; it's unique with just a hint of something sinister, and the sexy-humor bits were spot on.
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It explained in the first chapter, rainbow wears it to reduce her bust size so she can be in the wonderbolts.
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To be honest I was hesitant writing this chapter that's why it took so long because I felt it was unecessary at first and just wanted it short, but it just snowballed into this and so far I'm glad people like it.
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Oh whoops sorry haven't read the other chapters in a while.
Awesome update! If Spike has to deal with such sultry chaos when they aren’t bedding him, can’t wait to see what the princesses have in store for him.
Aside from some of the anime bits love the story and absolutely can't wait for the next chapter.
Who knew binge reading 3 chapters would be hard work, but it was worth it. Very curious to see where you going to take this story as we see, what the meaning behind those nightmare Spike has and what is the secret that Celestia and Luna have been hiding from him
Wait, did everyone take a picture outside while they were still naked?
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No they didn't. Celestia fixed their clothes with a spell, so they were fine.
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Oh, I must've missed that. Would've been funny though.
did you mean to say cups??
That was such a sweet chapter you can tell just how much they care for him.
How long will we have to wait for a new chapter?
Is there any update on this story?
This story still going to continue at some point?
Judging by what OP said in a blog post, this will continue when their co-author buddy gets his computer fixed, which is good to know.
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It will, we are just swamped by other projects that we hardly put any time writing it at the moment. For now we're making a chapter that's a two parter. And let's just say, you'll see why the princesses were being secretive to Spike.
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Also if you're talking about me, it wasn't broken. Turns out I just had to use the troubleshoot tool to get a WiFi connection again. God I suck with computers.
Also don't worry about the story we finished half of what we planned and will start work on the second part.
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I see. Well glad to get an update on the situation and learn that this great story isnt dead.
“I can’t help that if I like big parties.” Pinkie replied with a pout. I have a severe problem with people who can’t follow even the simple of request and put their interests before others. Crossing others privacy and not respecting boundaries or putting your wishes before the wishes of others is very serious in life and can get you in a lot of trouble, cost you your job, and your relationships. I know of someone who suffers from depression and while i don’t agree with them i respect their wish not to celebrate occasions centralized on them like their birthday. pinkie can’t seem to understand or respect the concept of boundaries or the fact the others don’t share the same personal interests as she does .