Abandoned by her friends during the events of Anon-A-Miss, and facing a harsh, unforgiving winter homeless and without support, Sunset makes a choice. One that draws the eye of a certain Entity.
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Ok they know now who the real guilty part is will there be confrontation soon?
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In another Interlude, yeah. I try not to rush things too much.
A pissed off Twilight Sparkle vs. The Entity.
Round 1... FIGHT!
Ok, I like how this is going. Glad i kept with it, look forward to more.
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I know, glad they will be and hoped they are forced to confess, and will they actually get a real punishment not the dam detention but expelled?
Now, this was a nice chapter. Loved the no BS mindset that Twilight was in. However, when she was choking Rainbow, I was expecting her to say this.
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I want this so badly now XD
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Now that I think about it, it works too well XD
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I think adding that would ruin the flow. It’s such a recognizable quote that it turns twilights actions into a comedic bit when the scene is trying to be serious.
I found this on the front page on the mobile site searching through updates. And let me just say, daaaamn this is good! I've already put you on tracking and I can't wait to read more!
frankly twilight should have smacked rainbow for the last comment, rainbow hasn't gained the right to refer to sunset as a friend again.
The way you interweve lore as needed is really well-done. Most of the time, this kind of thing comes off as super forced, but here it reads more like something from the darker side of canon we don't get to witness in the main series. New and different, but still very true to the way magic works canonically.
Also, friiiiiiick this is depressing. And while I'm not a huge fan of "Twilight Yells At Everyone Foreverâ„¢," it's a lot less gratuitous here, mostly cuz she isn't swearing her head off at anyone. I absolutely despise fics where Twilight drops the F-Bomb nonstop. Twilight's also mindful of her anger and actively tries to temper it, which goes a really long way towards solidifying this as the Twilight we know from the show and not some caricature for screaming wish-fulfillment.
(I rather like how no-nonsense Twilight is right now. Very take charge, every bit an angry Princess as I would expect. And, she gets a super-powerful artifact practically thrown at her because mommy is mad. That... is very right. Finally, that infinite source of magical energy will DEFINITELY not be a super-important plot-point later... 'wink'.)