Abandoned by her friends during the events of Anon-A-Miss, and facing a harsh, unforgiving winter homeless and without support, Sunset makes a choice. One that draws the eye of a certain Entity.
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Find the CMC next.
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They'll be in it, it takes time.
Whew! Awesome chapter, and don't worry. I figure this wasn't a revenge fic, but i figured there would be Consequences, and I really hope they all pay for it big time!
I also hope Rainbow does NOT GET A SECOND CHANCE! THAT NONE OF THEM DO!
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That'll be up to me, lol. I did say to someone else that this fic is intended to have a happy(ish) ending. Realistic, but not darkfic ending. I'm glad you're enjoying it though
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I'm rooting for Tempest to be Sunset's true love, and hoping the girls there become her true friends.
Also hope everyone in the school gets their their ases chewed out for torturing Sunset and helping Anon A Miss.
This took me awhile to catch up, but I'm glad I did cuz this is amazing! Crossing over a popular game with no plot with the most popular Sunset story arc was unexpected when I discovered this story, but by God you combine it so well & perfectly, I also wanna go buy the game, just to feel and understand what Sunset & the girls are going through!
Speaking of the girls, I'm very curious & interesting on reason you pick Starlight, Sour, Aria, & Tempest as well as their (unfortunate) purpose for being stuck there before Sunset shown up. Also I gotta admit, the second Tempest spoke in Spanish that threw me off completely, but the more she spoke, the more I enjoy it & I can see her as a latina, it suits her so well.
Congrats I-A-M, you got yourself a new reader with their full attention in me as I can't wait for more! Oh one more thing... Please ship Tempest & Sunset, I just love the way Tempest calls Sunset "chica" in almost in every situation!
Has anyone else noticed a trend for Anon-A-Miss fics to cast Rainbow as the loser wannabe love interest?
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It is pretty common, but sometimes they use Applejack or one of the Dazzlings.
(Well dang... Sunset's hit the depths of despair indeed... in a weird kind of way to. I guess the Entity's getting a snack.
Poor Sunset though... I also appreciate how you didn't just make the Rainbooms all terrible people full of awfulness. There are logical reasons why things went the way they did. Are they enough? Heck no. Should they feel guilty? Absolutely. But yeah, precautions could have been taken, messages and words better sent and spoken simply were not. And Twilight knows Celestia thinks of Sunset as a daughter. Well, did anyone tell Sunset that?
So yeah... ugly situation. Easy to see how it got there.)
Who would bother to start the war with species who have complete control over celesial bodies? Twilight you are a hypocrite and your species rule by intimidation.
This is gonna be a bit random, but I've been re-reading this story, and thinking about things.
I wonder if the bloodweb ever contains things that do not directly improve survival chances. It may sound unnecessary, but after being trapped in the Entity's realm for so long, I wonder how often they find themselves craving something like a creature comfort. It's a way to drag more hope out of a target. IF they can do well enough and survive, they could have something like a favorite food item. This chapter proves that the Entity is always watching and listening, and will respond do the Surivor's requests. It removed Twilight when Sunset asked. So why doesn't someone ask "Can I trade these blood points in for a ham sandwich?"
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The Entity is adapting in Dead by Midnight after all. Any way to get more hope out of something may warrant trying, at least once.
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I know this fic is long finished, and I'm replying to years old comments, but I wanted to give my 2 cents as well.
I don't think Sunset should give them a second chance as well. Not at first anyways. I don't think she should even go back to CHS. The students and faculty could all grovel, beg for forgiveness, and tithe her with their all their lunch money, but that's not going to change the fact that they drove a student to attempted suicide. Being trapped in an environment with that kind of tension for 8 hours a day wouldn't be good for anyone. I suppose Sunny would be used to it, after spending months in the Entity's game.
The way I imagine it, assuming Sunny escapes, she transfers to Crystal Prep with whoever else escapes with her. It would give her a clean(er) start, and she could rebuild her life from there. After a time, she may forgive her fellow classmates. We've heard them describe how hard it was for them to forgive Sunset, and now they'd see it from the other side. Or, Sunset may cut them off completely. In either case, she would need to forgive them, and move on. Not for their sake, but for herself. Constantly dwelling on their betrayal isn't good for her own mental health.
Don't know. Why are ponies and monsters so awful?
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Difference between equines and primates. Prey, and some creature, that had a long, hard think about it's place in life, and decided that if it were to get rid of predators and instrall itself as one it needed to be agressive. So we took our stones and sticks, and started being mean to basically all life. It's in our blood, if we don't dominate as primate, we end up in someone elses jaw, and this agression went everywhere, even back to us. Monkeys often bully each other. We just can't keep our hands to ourselves. We want more money, more power, more everything. We don't seem to want one thing - peace.