1100547 yeah.. i know. i just wish i got more featured moments, you know... worked hard on it, and i got LOTS of views, but i don't understand how the feature system works... its like... just weird.
1102002>>1102100 ummm thanks but u dont have to watch me I'm not much of a writer more of a reader in this site i came to this story because of the clop
Paragraph 8 golden ticket is spelled golden ticked Awesome chapter though. There were some other minor things like when someone would go so say something there would be no comma before the quotation marks and the first letter of the sentance, and a few times the name would be lower cased not capitalized. Please dont think im being mean but you said that constructive criticism was accepted. I like his too to my stuf becaus i want to become better than i am. I really did ABOSLULY LOVE this chapter. I did not expect Sugar Sweets to show up.
I must say that Sugar is Very open minded about this
1100196it's because she understands Bono and the princess's situation, plus this was what I had in mind from the very start of this story. so... yeah.
good chapter, as it seems well thought-out.
1100390you think this was well thought-out? read this...
The best Troller in ALL of Equestria
1100464 i already have read half of it....
1100527ahh, nvr mind...
1100532 don't get me wrong, it's good too!!!!!
1100547 yeah.. i know. i just wish i got more featured moments, you know... worked hard on it, and i got LOTS of views, but i don't understand how the feature system works... its like... just weird.
shit just better....no other comment
1100592thanks sonic... lolz, sonic the hedgehog likes ponies.
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1100628 hey what can i say I LIKE PONIES
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1101846...I beat her in several races but i dont tell her that lol
lolz, i like you. mind watching me, ill watch you in return.
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1101978wow... i feel like when twilight met fluttershy... im twilight... and your fluttershy!
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1102002>>1102100 ummm thanks but u dont have to watch me I'm not much of a writer more of a reader in this site i came to this story because of the clop
1102234yea... i figured as much... its always about the clop... not the actual story.... oh, well... SOML
1102248 hey don't get me wrong its a good story it hard to find a good m/f clop on this site these days
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Two royalty and love? Lucky guy, I'm jealous.
Cool story.
Inside his head:
"IM GOING TO FUCK ALL THE MARES!!!!"
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1111268doctor... my friend pinkie pie is here right now... she said she had a message for you. one sec...
(ok, pinks, you're on... go, go!)
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this is sooo fantasy I approve
1112618 day dreams are the best dreams!
I sense much sex for Bono, he gets the three so called 'best looking mares in Equestria'
1124824 so long ago... chapter two... what was the pun?
Wow um well hi guys guess he found me
1225621 and you thought you could hide behind those concrete walls... naughty stallion.
Well luna already knew I was afraid for others to know
1226176 aww, it's okay! just enjoy the fic about you and remember, she loves you!
Ok hey when exactly did u notice me
1226240 ... uh... a while ago......
Hehehe sorry oh look at the time gotta go do u know what so bye
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Paragraph 8 golden ticket is spelled golden ticked Awesome chapter though. There were some other minor things like when someone would go so say something there would be no comma before the quotation marks and the first letter of the sentance, and a few times the name would be lower cased not capitalized. Please dont think im being mean but you said that constructive criticism was accepted. I like his too to my stuf becaus i want to become better than i am. I really did ABOSLULY LOVE this chapter. I did not expect Sugar Sweets to show up.
Yet again, good chapter... Must. Resist. Correcting. Spelling and Grammar!!!