This is shorter than the last chapter, I know; But I feel like I had to stop where I did because of various reasons. So... Positive comments, feedback and constructive criticism please.

For a story that seemed to be premised on pure clop, you weave the emotional journey of your characters masterfully with the physical passion. I don't normally read clop, but I appreciate the work put into this. It's touches the heart at the same time that it raises the heart rate. I'm curious as to what happens when Luna inevitably finds their little love nest.

937445 lets just say she's could ruin everything... or will she?!

937539 Celestia said luna could use it if she found it though...

937856 SSSHHH!!! youse gonna be guvviin da endin awaize!

did I miss anything about his cutiemark???

938250 Hold on, let me sum it up for yah... It's a boner... formally known as a penis that is hard! Uhh... His talent is... Well, he can fuck like a god damn god! And his name "Bono" almost sounds like boner!... If you have any other questions, let me know!

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So are you saying he's a ponystar??? That's why celestia doesn't want anybody to know about him???

Rather sweet..
Only make sure you note the ponys style of talking :)

938401 No. He is not a pornystar. he is a stallion who's talent is: He can control when he cums- He can be rough or he can be super soft- And because of his talents, he is ashamed because he gets awkward questions about his cutie mark. That's why he resorts to asking Princess Celestia for help.
938535 You will find that out next chapter. Voice... I guess your right. I'll update that momentarily.

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Oh, ok. Thank you so much for clearing that up for me. Must've been REALLY awkward when he got his cutie mark

938812 i would imagine so... wait i DID imagine so!

Wow. Never have I been so jealous of a pony before.

939377 ... You missed the point of ch.2 assuming you read it. Because of his situation, he can never have kids nor a family! It is a clopfic... But I like to stir up emotions to. Don't be jealous of him. Years of sex is good but after a while, I think it would just get old, ya know?

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Bono: "Mom, Dad, LOOK AT MY CUTIE MARK!!!"
Mom: "Oh how wond... Umm maybe we should cover that up. You don't want everybody to be around you all the time trying to look at your cutie mark, right???"

939430 i could see this one coming before i even came up with the idea for this fic... everything will be explained in the upcoming chapters. INCLUDING THAT!

939569 I wish you can see me right now. I'm fan-girling all over the place so hard right now

935250 Yes....quite.... I am very satisfied with this story, Celestia deserves this.

941249 ah... lol, we r bullz crappzing the commentz againz... ill be deleting the comments soon. i dont want it to be filled up with nonsense. but this was fun just not serious though.

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Oh no!!! Too much silliness!!! Can't... Take... It... Anymore!!! It was fun while it lasted. As they say, all good things must come to an end. Next chapter???

941396 Yes. The next chapter is almost finished! It will be published within the hour! Also, The world is made up of good things that end. But then... After a while, don't they restart and show up again?

Im not much of a fan of clopfics but this is ok or as I would say about anything this is fabulous

aw,
I like how you interweaved emotion into this story.... seems kind of sad that he'll never have a family... then again, I don't believe in love :P

Also, Celestia must have some pussy if Bono was able to climax three times inside of it......

So much cum...ech!

You know, I WAS happy I started reading this.......But that pun.
It hurt me....

Okay, two issues. First off...

He clenched up and came deep into the princess's whom.

Should be womb Secondly,

it would sent her over the edge…

Should be send That is all.