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I realize some of you never thought of this... So I did! I have a thing for royalty characters, which if some of you are old fans of my work, you would know this. Positive comments please and if you have to put your constructive criticism in, that is actually even more appreciated. But really, no bull crap people, please!
I would like to thank Bono for letting me use his name... NO not the musician, he's a good friend of mine who happens to have very practical parents.
that last line, *buh dum, pish!* loved it, it was quite... pleasing.
931712 Thanks. Lol.
certanly was a, uh, intresting] read. first clopfic read actually
931794 No comment on that.931805 Glad you liked it.
(Relieve) I think you might have meant this word instead of (Relief) . Good start, obviously
complications ahead. Looking forward to the climax.
May I say something?
Ahem... This needs some serious work. The excessive stuttering, while cute, does not make for a good fic based on a character that never stutters...
And you need to work on your description... the scenes would feel... more... if you added some.
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He liked it some much that he, Doubled the comment!
Edit after reading: Great story, can not wait for the "More to Cum" part.
931872 Fixed it and as for the stuttering, I wanted to get the right mood for the reader, it doesn't sound like the princess but it was supposed to be awkward. Plus, IDC who you are, if your facing a pony with a dick for a cutie mark, I think your gonna stutter. i mean think about it, be realistic. not trying to sound mean.
931937 Lol, yea I noticed that.
931872 your right! thank you very much. these things sneak by my eyes sometimes.
931937 lol, yea i noticed that.
The text seems to be very "he did this, she did that" and very sectioned in the way that it seems to first explain all of the premise, then all of the room, then all of the clop and dialog last, try to mix it up for an easier read and a more skilled look of the fic.
This comes from a person who has read ALOT of clop and I know a good clopfic if I do say so myself
932354 Hmm... I'll take that into consideration. Thank you but I'm working on another clopfic that's more of a successor to this one.
am i posting bull crapz? i like your work...
932605 thnx, and your not the only one who was posting bullz crapz. ill delite all bullz crapz comments in 15 minz.
932712, hey, you should make a twidash fanfiction, it would be AWESOME!!!!!!!
932748 hmm... i like the idea, but my shipping couples is this. applesparkle/ dashpie/ flarity... sorry, and i already made another story about my shipping pairing, soooo... yea.
932795 awwwwwww
but this pair is my favorite by far 
FTW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
932811 i know, but im like most ppl. if you look up "rainbow dash shipping" on any immage search, you will see here with pinkie pie alot. if you look up "twilight sparkle shipping" you will see here paired up with applejack more. plus, i liked my pairings when i first got into mlp. i also like rainbowapples, but not as much as applesparke!... if im confusing you, stop me.
932827
Twilestia is best!
AWWWWWWWWWWWW YEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAHH
935018 here's your theme song! 935021 yah like that???
Quite amusing
I found the plot quite interesting
Also, didn't know the Princess used so much slang.........
936125 Your the first to notice that. You sometimes see sides of characters you don't see in the show on my stories!
did ya get that???
NO... NO GOD DAMN IT! NO BONO PICS PLEASE THIS IS NOT HIS STORY! ... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
This is shorter than the last chapter, I know; But I feel like I had to stop where I did because of various reasons. So... Positive comments, feedback and constructive criticism please.
For a story that seemed to be premised on pure clop, you weave the emotional journey of your characters masterfully with the physical passion. I don't normally read clop, but I appreciate the work put into this. It's touches the heart at the same time that it raises the heart rate. I'm curious as to what happens when Luna inevitably finds their little love nest.
937445 lets just say she's could ruin everything... or will she?!
937539 Celestia said luna could use it if she found it though...
937856 SSSHHH!!! youse gonna be guvviin da endin awaize!
did I miss anything about his cutiemark???
938250 Hold on, let me sum it up for yah... It's a boner... formally known as a penis that is hard! Uhh... His talent is... Well, he can fuck like a god damn god! And his name "Bono" almost sounds like boner!... If you have any other questions, let me know!
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So are you saying he's a ponystar??? That's why celestia doesn't want anybody to know about him???
it was rather sweet .. although How did he know he was good in bed if he only had two mares?
other than that good work
Rather sweet..
Only make sure you note the ponys style of talking :)
938401 No. He is not a pornystar. he is a stallion who's talent is: He can control when he cums- He can be rough or he can be super soft- And because of his talents, he is ashamed because he gets awkward questions about his cutie mark. That's why he resorts to asking Princess Celestia for help.
938535 You will find that out next chapter. Voice... I guess your right. I'll update that momentarily.
938630
Oh, ok. Thank you so much for clearing that up for me. Must've been REALLY awkward when he got his cutie mark
938812 i would imagine so... wait i DID imagine so!
Wow. Never have I been so jealous of a pony before.
939377 ...
You missed the point of ch.2 assuming you read it. Because of his situation, he can never have kids nor a family! It is a clopfic... But I like to stir up emotions to. Don't be jealous of him. Years of sex is good but after a while, I think it would just get old, ya know?
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Bono: "Mom, Dad, LOOK AT MY CUTIE MARK!!!"
Mom: "Oh how wond... Umm maybe we should cover that up. You don't want everybody to be around you all the time trying to look at your cutie mark, right???"
939430 i could see this one coming before i even came up with the idea for this fic... everything will be explained in the upcoming chapters.
INCLUDING THAT!
939569 I wish you can see me right now. I'm fan-girling all over the place so hard right now
935250 Yes....quite.... I am very satisfied with this story, Celestia deserves this.
941249 ah... lol, we r bullz crappzing the commentz againz... ill be deleting the comments soon. i dont want it to be filled up with nonsense. but this was fun
just not serious though.
941333
Oh no!!! Too much silliness!!! Can't... Take... It... Anymore!!! It was fun while it lasted. As they say, all good things must come to an end. Next chapter???
941396 Yes. The next chapter is almost finished! It will be published within the hour! Also, The world is made up of good things that end. But then... After a while, don't they restart and show up again?
Serious comments please. This chapter took a little help from my friend, Bono. Not the pony, the actual friend who let me use his name. I needed help with the word play but he was the one who told me You need to let Luna have him. It's just not fair to let Celestia have him all to herself. So I did. This is technically considered incest, but very light incest. I intend on changing the description to show this. Thank you for positive feedback. Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated.
I like the style that you write in, and you use just the right amount of detail to make it look polished.
941838 thank you very much.
i worked rather hard on this one to get it just right. not perfect... but not normal either.
Actually pretty good. Going into the humorous side and getting Celestia into the Molestia state of mind if she brought in other mares (Not normal or average mares but more of the ones that would do anything to keep getting a good screw [Trixie would seem to be one of em in my opinion]). Somewhere down the line he could just end up being the benefactor to several families or herdmates based on which stories you use as a factual.