Its taken me a long time to collect my thoughts on this chapter. It's currently the shortest of the others, I know. But I feel the emotional plotting will suffice for the length in the end.
Please leave positive comments. No bull crap, please. Constructive criticism is appreciated. Thank you for the feedback.
I thought so to when i made it, wanted to use it for the last unicorn ("this has nothing to do with unicorns" instead of this) but memebuilder kept eating my lolz (aka some error).
983338 Aww. that sucks! ... Can you make a meme that's like, insane Twilight popping out of the bushes saying "I am the author. your argument is invalid!" I would use that so much!
984922 i better prepare myself then. But still, two freaking princess. I dont know why but he's like a stallion version of twilight. He's the one out of three ponies that have had action with both princesses, besides twilight and rainbow dash.
991695 I meant in other fics. You don't see other characters get shipped with princess celestia or Luna more than twilight or rainbow dash. Sorry if I got you confused
Its taken me a long time to collect my thoughts on this chapter. It's currently the shortest of the others, I know. But I feel the emotional plotting will suffice for the length in the end.
Please leave positive comments. No bull crap, please. Constructive criticism is appreciated. Thank you for the feedback.
O.O this is really quite amazing. the creativity definately shows
oh.. and yay! first comment (technically...)
982914 I'm glad you liked it.
I love these emotional chapters, shows the different side of the characters in the story.
983024 It's not too much, right? It took me awhile to get it down in the right tone.
983032
I though it was a great chapter! Just right.
983049 Whew! Thanks for the feedback!
Nice, good work
again, the pace of the story just feels way to fast......
983188 Yea, I always seem to do this. Aww well... It's my style, I guess. Its got likes, so... Yea!
And the conflict begins, can you love 2 different ponies equally?
983280 you've heard this song before, haven't you.
983288
If you mean a real song then nope? just my observation of the story and the event within it, i can do more then post sex related meme pics you know
If you mean like i went through something similar, then nope again but you dont have to experience it yourself to learn from it.
983299 once again... ya sly dog, you.
Yeaa Bono
Aww they are nice ladies give em a chance
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That reminds me that i didnt post any pics here..yet so have some:
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983321 lolz
983331 thats funny!
983337
I thought so to when i made it, wanted to use it for the last unicorn ("this has nothing to do with unicorns" instead of this) but memebuilder kept eating my lolz (aka some error).
983338 Aww. that sucks! ... Can you make a meme that's like, insane Twilight popping out of the bushes saying "I am the author. your argument is invalid!" I would use that so much!
Normally I can't stand emotion but... You pull it off.
Bono gets to have two sisters... Two FREAKING princesses. He's a boss
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984833 lol, you didn't notice this would happen from chapter 3??? wait till next chapter. it just might leave you saying "qafuq???"
984922 i better prepare myself then. But still, two freaking princess. I dont know why but he's like a stallion version of twilight. He's the one out of three ponies that have had action with both princesses, besides twilight and rainbow dash.
OH NOES! IS BAD TIME FOR BONO!
984952 There is only Bono, there never was Rainbow or Twilight with the princesses.
991695 I meant in other fics. You don't see other characters get shipped with princess celestia or Luna more than twilight or rainbow dash. Sorry if I got you confused
992788 No, there is only Bono for Celestia and Luna, no one else, or I dislike it.
996779 sssss aaahhh... yea, thats the thing... ya see, there is going to be a twist, but its going to be good. youll like it. trust me.
996980 oh, no no no. its not that... regardless, there is going to be a twist. i think you will like it though.
997451 Tis' but a twist, then I shall like it!
997460
awsome chapter
1017875 Relax. They wont find out. Besides, Bono has this effect on people. They just love his... Personality!
1002533thanks!
1018509 bono's boner: Your going.. To LOVE ME!
I'm jealous. Whit the two princess AND in love too? Lucky guy... Still like it
This is a great story, and not just as a clopfic. You have some serious talent in writing, keep up the good work.
1032607 thank you! and i will
Hells yeah its Right
Still good, still good. I'll stop correcting the spelling... It is just a minor irritant for me. That is all. :3