Despite being a mute, Vinyl was pretty confident about her new life in Canterlot High, until she met this mysterious cellist...
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Of course I’ll stick around!
I'm not going anywhere if you aren't. I felt the tension in this chapter, wondering if something was going to go wrong, and still feeling quite certain that something is going to go wrong down the line. But things have to go wrong in order for them to eventually go right again.
Yay an update! Can't wait to see what else you've got in store for the next chapter!
as already mentioned really nice chapter. Looking forward to more
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Thank you Madox! o/
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Heeyyyy thank you for the compliments and criticism my dude!
For Octavia's personnality, you're the only judge. Some people like to witness a bigger evolution of character, some don't. You'll see!
For the paragraph, if you don't think the structures has improved once you finish reading, could you DM me a story with a decent one. Because at the moment I really don't see what I could change...
Anyway, I hope you'll keep enjoying the story. You still have plenty to read, and I do think I've improved since the first chapters, so... have fun!
Bisous,
Saga.
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Oh well hello there
I'm glad you like (I mean, I think you do? ^^" )the story and the characters! It appears that I managed to convey the right emotions through my writing, which is a good thing!
Hope you'll enjoy the remaining chapters!
Saga.
I'm afraid that was a pretty dumb plan. Bon Bon's bit was fine, she was prepared and stuff, but Vinyl's bit was foolish:
It's all going to add up to a problem down the road.
It would have made more sense for Dana to distract him. She could have asked for his help moving something heavy, for example, without attracting any attention.
Also, Lyra, delete that fucking video.
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That’s the nice bit about it that helps the story flow. This builds up suspense for what happens next. If nothing stupid happened, then it would be harder for the plot to move onward. It was a well made plan, but could have been done better. It was made by some teens trying to help their friend, not world class bank robbers pulling off the biggest heist of the century.
It just hit me. Octavia is Weiss Schnee. Or, at least in a similar position. And as such, I am posting an epic Weiss song in her honor. Because goddammit it's good music.
Yeah I own this beat~ you can call me the king or the ruler~ felon on the bass, getting hoarse on the mic~
We're getting 20 percent cooler! we had a great day out~
Epic choice of distraction song xD