Despite being a mute, Vinyl was pretty confident about her new life in Canterlot High, until she met this mysterious cellist...
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A fair point.
True enough.
Dude, she's twisted her ankle. That is not how it works.
Want a list?
Well, people who aren't usually considered athletic have invented many things. Such as basic healthcare.
You would say that.
Especially for a gym teacher.
This is going to end poorly.
Oh wow.
He is a scary man.
No idea.
College can be a bitch.
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Yes, college can be a bitch, but it's okay, I'll survive ^^
Also, concerning Discord's number, I'd advise you to try and replace the numbers by something else... Just a little easter egg I made.
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Because I'm an absolute M A D L A D
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Ah, clever.
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it's just numbers to letters and it spells Chaotic
So Storm King is...a drug? Okay...so is the guy with that name the one distributing it or does he not exist in the Equestria Girls world?
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Since Storm King isn't that much of a "real" name (even by MLP standarts), I did decide to not include him as a being, but rather as a different type of threat.
I hope this explanation is sufficient ^^"
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Huh...In my own EG story I gave him the name 'Rex Storm' (since 'Rex' means 'king', get it?), but I guess that works too. I just got my hopes up a bit that he would show up in this story in person, but oh well.
I wonder qho is gonna be in more trouble in the end: Sombra or Discord
and by the way: F*** YOU SOMBRA!!!
looking forward to see how this will go down
Found one small mistake:
I suppose this should be smell
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Hey Mad!
I'm glad you hate Sombra, it means I'm doing a good job ^^
Spoil: Of course Discord is gonna get out of there just fine, he's Discord! Also I want to keep him around a bit :P
Thanks for the heads up!
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Oops! That may just have been me not paying attention to who was speaking! I'm changing this right away, sorry and thank you! o/
I laughed so damn hard reading this chapter. Best-of:
My god, Lyra's amazing. I think this chapter is among the best you've written so far! Octavia being good at lying is an interesting and really well made development! And I like the fact that this chapter is told by Vinyl but more focused on Lyra. Anyway, since I don't watch MLP I couldn't get the reference with Storm King but their reaction when they realize Discord's plan is both logical and hilarious. This chapter made Sombra even more despicable, so no regret!
Great job!!
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Hello again!
As always, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter so much! I'm also thrilled it made you laugh so much, especially in a more serious-themed chapter, I try to defuse the situation, often thanks to Lyra, that is true.
Concerning the Storm King, he was the main antagonist of the 2017 MLP movie, as well as the superior to Tempest Shadow (the dealer friend of Discord) and Grubber (her dog) in the pony universe. Also he has the most badass voice, by a guy with the least mlp-voice-actor-face in the world, Liev Schreiber (google it!)
Since he doesn't have a real name, I chose to make him into a different kind of threat, instead of a living being. I'm kinda proud of this decision ^^
Also I'm glad you still love Discord and hate Sombra!
Bisous!
Saga.
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