Despite being a mute, Vinyl was pretty confident about her new life in Canterlot High, until she met this mysterious cellist...
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Brilliant! I think you did a great job of describing the 'lonely and desperately wants friends but was taught not to' rich kid style. Fantastic job mate.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Yours truly,
D.s
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**Ego rate critical**
Thank you!! Love ya!
Saga.
Enjoying the story, looking forward to future installments.
Minor note; "How would she ever convince her mother to accept that? Vinyl, Lyra and Octavia were really nice to her, which was rare from her fellow students" I think you meant BonBon, rather than Octavia here :)
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I edited this mistake, thank you for this and for your positive feedback!
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Um, thanks?
My name? I don't even remember... I have been using it for so long.... But I know it means several things...
Missed a letter
Warmful is not a word.
The plural of person is people.
There's a few of these errors, but not really any spelling mistakes or punctuation errors that i noticed. I'll definitively keep reading
why must you hurt me in this way?
Uh... Would Octavia EVER say "thanks" instead of "thank you" ....? It just doesn't seem to fit with this whole "cultured young lady" thing you've got going for her...