• Member Since 16th Feb, 2015
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From birth she was destined for something bigger than herself, destined for greatness. However, fate was cruel, and made her destiny for greatness go down an evil path that almost no one could save her from… almost no one.

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The ending seemed incredibly rushed, and I caught dozens of spelling/grammar/punctuation problems, but I confess that your story caught my attention, and I simply had to finish it. If you'd like someone to read over and polish your work it, shoot me a PM and I'll see what I can do.

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Wow this is a really late response. Sorry bout that.

Thanks for the advice. I'll be honest, it was kinda rushed. I am writing these origin stories for all my OC's from my ask account I have on the app Ifunny. Since this is mainly for my subs on there and me cuz I have ideas and stuff, I rushed to get it down and out. I'm not too much of a writer, but this was the best way to tell my friends where my oc's (which I call the Fam) came from and how they came to be the ponies, or dragon or gryphon, they are now.

However, I do really appreciate the offer. I honestly didn't know anyone I don't know or previously knew these ocs would read this. Thank you

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