“Uh, you sure this is the right place Twilight? Cuz All I see is nature…. is Rainbow a hobo?”
Seriously, I don't know why, but the last sentence with the hobo made me laugh much more as it should have.
Nice idea. Didn't see a HIE fic with such a kind of twist. Normally it's always: "Human A lands in Equestria by unknown magical anomaly/Discord or Faust (some immortal being in general)". That's a nice change of pace.
8370337 Not just for spelling but someone who will recognize awkward sentence structure and wording. A lot of editors neglect that and just worry about spelling and punctuation.
At the moment trying to finish the last part of this chapter, should finish it by This weekend then all that's left is getting it through the editorial stage, then brush anything missed and it should be up by the weekend of some time later next week.
Do whatever you think is right man. Just pace yourself and things will go smoothly. Can't wait for more.
Seriously, I don't know why, but the last sentence with the hobo made me laugh much more as it should have.
Nice idea. Didn't see a HIE fic with such a kind of twist. Normally it's always: "Human A lands in Equestria by unknown magical anomaly/Discord or Faust (some immortal being in general)". That's a nice change of pace.
May want to go over your chapter again when you have time author. Lot of grammatical errors.
u need an editor my dood
still a good story though
Didn't the manicore's body disappear into smoke.
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No, black mist came off his body and vanished. The corpse remained
8307686
Ah okay then. I understand now.
Another story I really want to offer my editing services to; yet still hindered by lack of a proper keyboard.
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Well if you ever do get one, I gladly accept the help.
8310185
I have one, it's just I'm on vacation and said keyboard is across the country.
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Ah, well whenever you are able to return to it, let me know.
Yeeeeah, getting Fluttershy to sorta accept him might take awhile.
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Here's an interesting question? Is he the real one? Or is the one on Earth the real one? What makes the real one "real? I wonder....
Can't wait for the next chapter!
This story is awesome!!!
I love this story, but you need an editor. I can't wait for you to get one so this story can live up to its full potential.
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I agree with you there.
8370337
Not just for spelling but someone who will recognize awkward sentence structure and wording. A lot of editors neglect that and just worry about spelling and punctuation.
8370358
I agree
When next AWESOME update!?
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At the moment trying to finish the last part of this chapter, should finish it by This weekend then all that's left is getting it through the editorial stage, then brush anything missed and it should be up by the weekend of some time later next week.
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Awesome.
What is this douche you speak of?
was caught off guard by that one