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Spike still in a rut plus dizzy giving spike permission to have sex with pinkie plus how most girls are like in this story = shenanigans
Ok sequel to the story frombefore glad but one question.
IS SPIKE GOING TO GET LAID FINALLY?!!
i get he was recovering and now had to recover again but come on!
He needs NO Desrves to finally get some dam BOOTY!
Hey there! I see you're continuing RHD! I'd like to add two quick writing tips, if I may:
First off, if dialogue ends or is interrupted by a variation of 'said', the spoken part is normally finished with a comma instead of a full stop. It's kind of still the same sentence, that's why it's usually done. For exampe
would become
Question marks and exclamation points are unaffected.
Secondly, when characters address one another, writers normally put a comma directly in front of the word they're calling the other. There often is a very short pause there in real life, but the more important reason is to avoid confusion. Take this:
Here, the speaker is telling someone else to come on Pinkie. With a comma it becomes
Now we know definitively that the speaker is directly talking to Pinkie Pie.
So Spike gets with Twilight cliche?
I'm glad there's a sequel to the original story. Looking forward to reading this.
I'm so glad the author remembered about Rarity breaking Pinkie's Party Cannon. This trip is going to be awkward for them. And in two days, Spike can legally GET LAID FINALLY. Spike is going to be in for a rough morning. Twilight, you are either stupid, forgetful, or both.
So is Twilight like turning into yandere for Spike, because she's showing signs of such
YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS SEQUEL
oh dear lord, i dont know if im ready for a sequel
eitherway im gonna read it
8205886 how can u tell
8205149 Very true. Commas also helps us distinguish
from
which is lewd.
8206145 Well Twilight is sneaking into Spikes bed (and she knows he's in rut season) and cuddling and kissing him. It makes me think she wants him to take her.
Spike's Estrus cycle is getting less resistant and pretty soon either he'll rut mares into oblivion or kill ponies in cold blood.
Maoorrrrrr pleeease
Please make more. I love the stories. :)
is spike going tohave romance in his life. or just one shot.
I noticed that you used gala in this chapter, but it was the S.S.C that all that happened, and no I'm not holding it against you it's just funny. great story by the way.
I just realised that is wrong the fight happened at the Summer Sun Celebration not the gala
Wasn’t keeping secrets from him what got that fight started in the first place which lead him into further trouble of secret problems? U think that when Twilight gave him his first kiss as a gift that would also meant she wants to be with the one who she thought as a brother her whole life? Unless she’s making another mistake of not being serious about it.