Haha! I remember this from yesterday night!

This was great, but there are a few minor errors, such as

Getting up, Silver raises herself onto her bed, and spreads her legs for the stallion before her. Using her hooves, she pulls apart her labia, and blows a soft jet of warm air at Cupid. “You know you want to.”

This is past tense, not present.

“Oh, fuck!”, she exclaimed, wholly unused to the sensations her body was being subjected to.

Don't put a comma after the dialogue; it's improper.

One more thing: all dialogue has to have punctuation marks on the inside of the quotation marks.

Otherwise, I'd love to see more of this; I found it extremely hot.

You got to love magic, ain't that right?

My name is PKMN Trainer Red and I approve of this fic.

Based on an idea from the FimFic Discord server. You know who you are.

I suppose Silver Stripes is about to have a little bit of existential angst. Hopefully it doesn't last too long so the two can get back to cuddling and snuggling every day (oh, and don't forget fucking one another's brains out).

8197735 One can only hope for more snuggling between the two.

This, folks, is why you read the whole article. Failure to do so can result in overdosing on medication, setting your house on fire, and gender swapping, among other things.

I found this to be a fun little romp. Though I noticed two small errors:

Cupid teased them with a hoof, feeling them firm to the touch; getting bolder, he took on into his mouth,

Should be one. Not on.

Slowly getting up, Silver brought herself to eye-level with Cupid’s fully-erect penis. Nervously poking it, she could feel the desire behind the firmness. Moving closer to Cupid, she leaned forward to whisper in his ear. “Silver… do you find me attractive?”

If I'm reading that correctly, Silver just called her friend her own name.

Kinda wish there was another part to this. I'd love to see if Silver was pregnant, and how she'd handle that.

8198815

Fixed, thanks!

Certainly considering that route, time will tell, eh? ;)

Oh, this is certainly interesting. 😗 I'll be watching this closely.

Aside from striking distressingly close to home (In so many ways ) I enjoyed it. Of course, I can't help but wonder if you can layer the transformation spells. If only the temporary version over the permanent one.

Taking a gulp, Cupid avoided eye contact, and looked down at the ground in shame. “Silver… I don’t think I can change you back.”

Aww man. He really is a cupid stunt

Cupid Stunt

ha

Nice start to a story (very nice!), but I'm hoping that we see the consequences of these actions.

8201043 still marked as "incomplete"

What was it Britishname Complicated said in his Marvel debut? Oh yeah...They really should put the warnings before the spell...

If this idea were expanded and upon... I would read the shit out of it. Holy shit I love this so damn much.
I'll be looking for more

I find these two perfect for each other. Their personalities just kinda blend well
one is the half witted casinova, and the other the quiet but reasonable mind.

I also found that clop scene quite detailed, though I would try doing things Diaries style and post something like "(Clop is coming.)" Just in case somebody does not want to see that. So they can skip it if need be.

Aside from the extremely overused 'jinkies, this spell is utterly irreversible just because' part, this was a fun little ride.

Really curious where the story goes from here, I must admit.

The first time I read Cupid Stunt I thought it said Stupid Cunt. oops