Samudra's Journal

by vren55

Entry 12: Or not...

Okay, this is strange. It’s been an entire decade. Ruling Aquestria has occupied my entire mind and while everything has been peaceful, well…

I’ve been hearing things again. I am hearing things right now. I’m not even in Aquamaris right now. I’ve been visiting the shores and the lovely coral reefs there, when I heard voices in the shallows. I tried to follow them, and led my guard on this merry whale’s chase all over the reef, only to realise that nobody could hear them.

Either my hearing’s just that much better than there’s, or it’s those voices that have returned.

Comments

[Wizardmon]

I don't think i will be able to read this story; Having never really been a fan of the combat of your current stories (too frequent, too long too large scale) but having already invested myself into the series you've written already I was compelled to stick through this till now.

I was originally reading to see world building/character interaction rather than the violent conflict you seem to want to write. I remember making a couple comments about how the first story was a bit misleading since it's rated E, but features some pretty violent themes that screamed rating T to me.

What I'm trying to say is that I'm burnt out on reading about your listings of casualties of war and death. Having seen this story just now (I can't remember it showing up in the featured, if it even did) I guess I'm just jaded enough to write this comment.

Don't take this as deep criticism, these are just my feelings as someone who wants to forget almost everything about the last story you wrote, only to see the next book is even further than the original in what drew me to the story in the first place.

[vren55]

8395228 eh, I get it. Don't feel bad. People want to read stuff they want to read.

[Wizardmon]

8396097
Thanks for understanding.
By the way good luck with your original book you're writing! Just seen the blog post about that.

[Black--Soul]

Damn that one hell of a time jump... She must be lonely losing her familie , friends & first love? Had they foals? Wonder if her friends etc. get added to a royal graveyard never to be forgotten?

Ok... This is going to cause major problems. If this get out panic will spread. What ever can cause this is to dangerous to be ignored. Do other Sea/Deepsea ponys suffer the same?

How are goundwalkers relations? Maybe they can help?