You've recycled a villain only you had a hardon for, with zero foreshadowing to boot, your other Villain is a Villain Sue, killed everyone else that could maybe do anything because YOU don't like them, which makes me wonder why you wrote in this universe in the first place...
Audience has entered Darkness-Induced Apathy Mode. Also fueling the "Who the fuck cares!? a bit is:Wasn't Silvespeak in Amber last chapter? So this was just a dream sequence anyway. Maybe, MAYBE I wouldn't been so bent out of shape if you hadn't of time skipped, or had an interesting believable antagonist like the last 2 books.
But Silverspeak will get out of it at the 13th hour because of course he does, he's the super speshiul hero, probably cure his cancer, redeem Mangus, and have a child!
I very much enjoyed The Monster Below. The concept of an earth pony trying to become an alicorn was amazing. The second book was great too, because it stayed within the realm of feasibility. SS trying to atone, Chrysalis being awesome...This installment feels like Star Wars:Return of the Jedi where the Empire has used their vast fleet and Death Star to obliterate literally every other planet/moon except Endor. Even that scenario would leave some hope in the audience..I suck at analogies.
Yeaaaaah. At this point, Mangus has won. Short of Silverspeak and co. finding a power or magic or a new Tree of Harmony that is powerful enough to literally retroactively undo most of the damage done by the war, the planet's fucked. While they can rebuild after winning, it's going to take centuries if not millennia to get things back to some semblance of normality. Silverspeak noted when he saw the planet from the moon that most of the green and blue was gone, taken over by brow. And now the moon is split apart into several pieces as well.
I genuinely did not expect that their technology would have advanced to the point of being able to teleport multiple warships into space, though. They must really have come a long way with weaponry in the 25 year time-skip.
This is hard for some to read, but the MO is what we expect from Magnus. Dude is like a DM's favorite villain, keeps coming back no matter what.
Sweet Mercy... Things aren't goint to Hell, no, we're going so much deeper.
This is boring.
You['re boring me.
You've recycled a villain only you had a hardon for, with zero foreshadowing to boot, your other Villain is a Villain Sue, killed everyone else that could maybe do anything because YOU don't like them, which makes me wonder why you wrote in this universe in the first place...
Audience has entered Darkness-Induced Apathy Mode. Also fueling the "Who the fuck cares!? a bit is:Wasn't Silvespeak in Amber last chapter? So this was just a dream sequence anyway. Maybe, MAYBE I wouldn't been so bent out of shape if you hadn't of time skipped, or had an interesting believable antagonist like the last 2 books.
But Silverspeak will get out of it at the 13th hour because of course he does, he's the super speshiul hero, probably cure his cancer, redeem Mangus, and have a child!
I very much enjoyed The Monster Below. The concept of an earth pony trying to become an alicorn was amazing. The second book was great too, because it stayed within the realm of feasibility. SS trying to atone, Chrysalis being awesome...This installment feels like Star Wars:Return of the Jedi where the Empire has used their vast fleet and Death Star to obliterate literally every other planet/moon except Endor. Even that scenario would leave some hope in the audience..I suck at analogies.
Good job Silverspeak.
Yeaaaaah. At this point, Mangus has won. Short of Silverspeak and co. finding a power or magic or a new Tree of Harmony that is powerful enough to literally retroactively undo most of the damage done by the war, the planet's fucked. While they can rebuild after winning, it's going to take centuries if not millennia to get things back to some semblance of normality. Silverspeak noted when he saw the planet from the moon that most of the green and blue was gone, taken over by brow. And now the moon is split apart into several pieces as well.
I genuinely did not expect that their technology would have advanced to the point of being able to teleport multiple warships into space, though. They must really have come a long way with weaponry in the 25 year time-skip.
... And that's how Westeros was made.
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how about you write a better book and them come back and complain .
you might actually have ground to actively berate this story then .