• Member Since 4th Mar, 2016
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Pomfme99


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In desperate need of proof reader pls. Two ponie siblings try to get by in a world that hates them. They love each other, more than a brother/sister should. The main six hate them for it, but in the very end come to accept the two. Discord marries fluttershy, as well as saving the day in the nick of time. Not sure how, but there it is. The ponies of Ponyville rejoice.

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Hello author. While we appreciate your enthusiasm in posting, the spelling and grammar errors in your story make it difficult to read and appreciate. Please consider seeking out a proofreader or editor to help you improve your story.

Yeah, I definetly need a proof reader and a better writing program for my Ipad as well. Sry for the poor writing lol, it has def been a while. I will fix this mess and post chapter two as soon as I can.

8034826 I know lol, just read through it and sry for the bad writing. I will fix as soon as I can, and def need a proof reader. That being said, incest is wincest! At least in fiction anyway. Lunestia, Twishine, AppleMac, these need more! Much more. ;)

8036346 Hillbilly? No, just a redneck hailing from the great state of confusion. :P

8034694 any chance at proof read? I know I fail at writing, but still have story to tell......
If if you have chance, would be welcome.

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