Shane doesn't belong here; Heck he doesn't belong to where he came from really. Now stuck here how will he cope? how will he find a way to keep going?
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Great chapter.
wha?! hello ironic twist
Good story.
If I had any complaints, it would be that I wish the chapters were longer and that there were more of them. lol![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
But considering that I have been a lazy bastard about keeping my own stories updated, that would be fairly hypocritical of me.
Keep up the good work, I'm excited to see where the story goes.![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
Hmm, so far the story's good, character's mature, not edge lordy nor some arrogant ass. My only gripe, is that while it's commendable that he's willing to work with them to integrate to show peaceful intent, he quickly switches to their exceptionalist term of everypony than to our more open and free everyone
I can think he was going inside his head was.
Holy Jesus... What is that?
Think this should be better as "flicker"
Hmm think this should be "wandered over each till they"
Stop making him a big pussy.
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He isn't being a pussy as you say, he is acting smart he knows they can easily overpower him and take everything and lock him up so he is doing everything to earn their trust
Yes, he is bending over backwards to be nice, but the ponies are being respectful in return. It all works out nicely, if slightly less entertaining than the asshole approach.
Well that was unexpected, I suppose it had to hit something sooner or later...
Oh damn. Tossing us into the deep end right off.
That's, actually a very good metaphor in my own opinion. 🤔
Oh my god! 😆 I'm loving both these references and the story so far.
Oooooooh shit......
So wait is this based off an actual space drone sent to space, or fictional material?
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Pioneer 10 is a very real space probe, it sent its last transmission in 2003, from 7.6 billion miles from earth
Welcome to the Hotel Equestria!![:twilightoops:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightoops.png)