Shane doesn't belong here; Heck he doesn't belong to where he came from really. Now stuck here how will he cope? how will he find a way to keep going?
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aw crap....the feels they hurt.....but i think we know who he gonna be with due to the romance tag....at this point...i dont think aj would mind.... maybe best pony could help heal his broken heart
I always personally disagreed with the idea that talking about something somehow magically helped. Like he initially said, it just dredges up old memories to the surface and makes other people sad or sympathetic. It could just be because I hate sympathy though, I'd much prefer to just get on with it.
Please continue
Now im Sad.
Yup. Crying. At work.
There is one thing I hate more than anything and that is when someone fucks with someone's mind or dreams and Luna had to do it he should be a HELL of a lot more upset about that and at the very least tell Luna that if she enters his dreams again he will no longer be her friend. Also MAGIC DOESN'T AFFECT IM SO HOW THE HELL CAN LUNA USE MAGIC TO ENTER HIS DREAMS?!?!
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Hm It seems that he is only somewhat hard to affect with magic.
I'm seeing two possible explanations, first is that he is assimilating the magical infused matter from the current place. The other is that his "matter" is impervious to magic as everything else from his original place, while his "spirit" is influenced by magic.
About Luna interfering with his mind... Well she is fundamentally a force of nature... she has the EXPLICIT task of fighting off nightmares so... no you really can't fault her.
It's was this paragraph that made me decide that this wasn't just going to be a good story; it was going to be a great story.
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I am so glad you are enjoying the story.
Shawna and Shane?
pfffft
Fuck I'm crying more then at the end of Terminator 2
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Wrong, we're both crying! Augh the feels!
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AW CRAP HERE COMES THE WATER WORKS!! 😢
This feels way too fast. I mean, he just met the ponies and already he's dredging up his most traumatic experiences. I understand that the ponies' ridiculous amounts of empathy could trigger this, and that he's probably a fairly open person. Still, it feels like too much all at once.
Iron Man is an old movie?
Welp, now I feel old...
Yeah, i really thought this was going to be a much different story with the badass picture and everything, now it just feels like every cliche in the hie fandom:
Really close with the ponies within the first day, has some terribly horrible thing that happens to him in the past, complete doormat. Ect, still i really thought the first chapter was really well done, i especially liked that whole "looking down the scope of his rifle" thing, other then that this is a common "HiE" cliche
Personally, I could do without the dreamwalking, one has a right to a basic bit of privacy yes? As to talking about the worst thing ever to happen, I would think they could manage not to press him on something like that before they've even known him a full week. There is such a thing as courtesy after all.
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Just wait. The badass part is coming. This is one of the few sobby parts.
Rough chapter. But that's what makes a chapter or story good. It needs to get down to the nitty-gritty. And Shane was a TEXAS RANGER? Not the baseball team, the actual police force. I love those guys, mainly because I'm a Texan. Back the Boys In Stetsons
Dang, those feels. I forgot about this chapter.
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Ditto!