Somehow I overlooked the last few sentences when editing I now realize.

8016757 No, no you didn't, I added them in last minute as I changed the structure of 2 paragraphs a bit.

I like it. It's not over the top, it's well paced, and thoroughly exciting!
Please continue.

No one can even pick it up with our hooves.

So here ponies use magic to pick thing with hooves and not granular jamming.

Man, EQG is canon in this one. Perfect. Now you have my undivided interest.

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There is some I have had to deviate from due to writing chapters before events have happened in season 8, but I try to keep to canon as much as I can.

Have to say, Shane is an interesting HIE character in comparison to other HIE characters I’ve read. My interest is still peaked for this story.