Of course it wouldn't be that easy to change Applejack's mind. Before this is over, I have a feeling that AJ will be deemed unworthy of her Element of Harmony. After all, how can she be fit to represent Honesty if she so easily believes the lie that all wargs are pony-eating monsters?
9288611 I don't do sunshine and rainbows....well besides the ones that come from the ponies, but I will definitely not go Halmark Channel on this story.
10693644 I sometimes take my computer to bed for some late night writing, and I placed it on the floor as I was tierd and didn't want to get up to put it on my desk before going to sleep. Because of this, when I got up in the morning I accidentally kicked the USB hub that allows the memory card holding all my stories to talk to my computer, and ended up breaking it, though luckily the card itself is fine.
Great story, wondering when there's going to be a new chapter. Though I'm worried as to what the Apple family and their cohorts/allies are going to do in the future.
Ok to be honest it feels a bit odd that the family that just showed up are bigger bigots than Granny Smith considering what AJs father must have gone through.
11885975 Their not bigger bigots then Granny Smith, there actually on the same level of bigotry. Remember what Sour gave as the reason Granny had him removed from their lives, Granny only disliked the title of nobility that Sour had chosen to take up, in all other areas they were in complete agreement about, especially when it came to wargs.
Though now that I have said that, I realize I have made Applebloom and Big Mac kinda the outliers in this equation....hmm, going to have to address that at some point.
Is this going to be some "sunshine and rainbows" fic that has applejack change her mind, or is it going to be more realistic?
Alright, where is this going ot go next? Cause at the moment i am thinking attempted assassination.
Bruh......
Something tells me that sour apples pals are of a group similar to the KKK...
9288611
You mean this being a fic where AJ figures out the evidence was falsified and kills the bastard...sure.
Great update. More please
Of course it wouldn't be that easy to change Applejack's mind. Before this is over, I have a feeling that AJ will be deemed unworthy of her Element of Harmony. After all, how can she be fit to represent Honesty if she so easily believes the lie that all wargs are pony-eating monsters?
I have a bad habit of overthinking things.
starting to see why granny got rid of him
Well, I can certainly see how this coukd lead to the Elements being disrupted.
Normally i hate drama, but this is gunna be good... Love the story by the way!
I look forward to the continueation of this story o.o
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I don't do sunshine and rainbows....well besides the ones that come from the ponies, but I will definitely not go Halmark Channel on this story.
Right now I am just wondering if Sour Apple and the stallion on the train in chapter 1 are one in the same
9290335
No, that's just a coincidence, Sour Apple is much more subtle about his hatred and bigotry.
9280118
Seriously. Can I know what's going on with others romances? This is kind of confusing!
9309033
Currently known are.
Twilight & Fenrir
Rarity, Rainbow Dash, & Big Mac
Fluttershy & Gilda
9309232
Ok, thanks.
Really good story by the way! I personally have high hopes for a few characters. Keep up the good work!
I am awaiting new content, I can understand that writing is hard and that shiny things are distracting, but plz, I needs to know what happens next!
Loving it so far. Please do continue it.
so far so good cant wait till aj marries a warg
More please, this is getting good
When are we going to have a new chapter?
I'm guessing this story is dead by now
Is there going to be a New Chapter soon? Please!
So, how's it going? This gonna update soon?
I hope there is a new chapter SOON
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/389315/a-diplomatic-visit
Will there EVER be a new chapter for this story?
10693455
Yes their will, but you will have to wait till next month as I have temporarily lost access to my stories.
10693552
How the heck did that happen????
10693644
I sometimes take my computer to bed for some late night writing, and I placed it on the floor as I was tierd and didn't want to get up to put it on my desk before going to sleep. Because of this, when I got up in the morning I accidentally kicked the USB hub that allows the memory card holding all my stories to talk to my computer, and ended up breaking it, though luckily the card itself is fine.
10693700
OUCH!!!!
Are we ever going to see a new chapter to this story?
Great story, wondering when there's going to be a new chapter. Though I'm worried as to what the Apple family and their cohorts/allies are going to do in the future.
Ok to be honest it feels a bit odd that the family that just showed up are bigger bigots than Granny Smith considering what AJs father must have gone through.
11885975
Their not bigger bigots then Granny Smith, there actually on the same level of bigotry. Remember what Sour gave as the reason Granny had him removed from their lives, Granny only disliked the title of nobility that Sour had chosen to take up, in all other areas they were in complete agreement about, especially when it came to wargs.
Though now that I have said that, I realize I have made Applebloom and Big Mac kinda the outliers in this equation....hmm, going to have to address that at some point.