When two humans land on a planet with their shell-person companion at the helm, they think they are prepared for anything. Ponies was not among their definition of "anything," however.
Would have thought, given teh problems the magic density would give an EVA person, that Keira would be picking up stresses and vibrations in the hull, related.
yeah, that could have been bad. This is why you should have multiple brains in on certain things! Dustin went full Kirk, didn't he? To Belay: how was your first encounter with the Royal Canterlot Voice? Keep going! ;)
Kiera's scrubbers and air cleaning was state of the art
After a light lunch, she wanted to look around town and find some sights that didn't include a particular mare
Oh good, she's got some time to—
"Look who I have found."
God DAMN mare, stop stalking the alien already! This isn't love. It's sexual assault! You're seriously not even going to give her an afternoon to herself?
At least now we know where Twilight Sparkle's obsessive side came from...
"I realized that with your daughter working on fixing all this,
Well okay, when you put it like that I can understand the urgency.
steel cables of magic
Steel cables of magic? Are they enchanted steel cables, or conjured cables, or cables made of magical steel, or cables made of steel type magic, or what?
You will have to forgive Twilight Velvet, she is in lust, and happy to fall back on the excuse that she was told to "show the nice aliens around."
Steel cables (I added quotes to denote it as an abstract concept) is how Luna described the magic lines of force in space. She likened magic on Equestria as being like faint cobwebs, all in a single direction, but in space those "faint cobwebs" are as strong as steel.
8346078 Thanks, and that's even less reason to forgive her. If she was in control of the situation it'd be a lot better than if she's just indulging in her urges without thought or consideration! You don't need to change it though. It's kind of shocking how strongly Velvet is coming onto Dust, but it's not bad for the story. Plus lesbians is the safest way to have sex, so no harm done.
magic lines of force
I'd use a similie then, something like "cables of magic strong as steel" or "magic like steel cables" or something. Too used to "steel ___" denoting things made of steel, rather than having properties of steel. The quotes technically work, I suppose.
sigh. i keep getting confused about whether he's dealing with Twilight Velvet or Twilight Sparkle. i'd really prefer it if the author referred to her as "Velvet"...
Yeah, personally I wouldn't be all too enthusiastic about mucking about with such a high-intensity thaumic field either. That's what golems are for. Or servitors...
Would have thought, given teh problems the magic density would give an EVA person, that Keira would be picking up stresses and vibrations in the hull, related.
Theres a lot of noise in spacetime.
I still dont understand the interactions with Twilight Velvet.
BlendTec moon, and apparently yes, ponies will blend.
yeah, that could have been bad. This is why you should have multiple brains in on certain things!
Dustin went full Kirk, didn't he?
To Belay: how was your first encounter with the Royal Canterlot Voice?
Keep going! ;)
Oh good, she's got some time to—
God DAMN mare, stop stalking the alien already! This isn't love. It's sexual assault! You're seriously not even going to give her an afternoon to herself?
At least now we know where Twilight Sparkle's obsessive side came from...
Well okay, when you put it like that I can understand the urgency.
Steel cables of magic? Are they enchanted steel cables, or conjured cables, or cables made of magical steel, or cables made of steel type magic, or what?
8345951 Thanks for the fix!
You will have to forgive Twilight Velvet, she is in lust, and happy to fall back on the excuse that she was told to "show the nice aliens around."
Steel cables (I added quotes to denote it as an abstract concept) is how Luna described the magic lines of force in space. She likened magic on Equestria as being like faint cobwebs, all in a single direction, but in space those "faint cobwebs" are as strong as steel.
8346078
Thanks, and that's even less reason to forgive her. If she was in control of the situation it'd be a lot better than if she's just indulging in her urges without thought or consideration! You don't need to change it though. It's kind of shocking how strongly Velvet is coming onto Dust, but it's not bad for the story. Plus lesbians is the safest way to have sex, so no harm done.
I'd use a similie then, something like "cables of magic strong as steel" or "magic like steel cables" or something. Too used to "steel ___" denoting things made of steel, rather than having properties of steel. The quotes technically work, I suppose.
sigh. i keep getting confused about whether he's dealing with Twilight Velvet or Twilight Sparkle.
i'd really prefer it if the author referred to her as "Velvet"...
Yeah, personally I wouldn't be all too enthusiastic about mucking about with such a high-intensity thaumic field either. That's what golems are for. Or servitors...