/i]..." The other two mares simply stood there, stunned by this pony's forwardness, sudden appearance, and the fact his boner was hanging out, before Amaya protectively stepped between Twilight [...]
I think you missed the opening bracket on this here HTML tag.
This is not a criticism, this is the way you are telling the story, but the animals that have the heat season The heat only passes when the female becomes pregnant or the heat season arrives on the final day, Or a few mares and dogs that get pregnant and the hormones eventually take a while to change They attack any stallions that try to mount them, Instinct of mother activated =) or in some cases the owners give vaccines to pass the heat, some animals in heat can be problem for the tutor.
Interesting, I thought that Amaya would have more problems with his race at pinkie's party It would be interesting if she had a bit of drama about it, and would explain why she has so many sex toys as it seems that the contraceptive in equestria the mares would get stallions to satisfy them. In short Amaya has so many toys to satisfy their sexual frustrations because with the bad reputation of the batpony she ends up scattering pretenders instead of attracting them.
As she masturbated, Amaya found her thoughts moving to Twilight; how close she was to Bade just now, how relaxed and relieved she looked today after her raging heat started the previous day. Amaya hadn't smelled her fertile scent either...
Amaya stopped as she realized something. "Holy hay Bade, you really did buck her good, didn't you?" Amaya asked herself quietly, the toy slowly moving again, "Finally gave up your V-card huh, and to a Princess no less? Wonder how you and she liked it, or if you were lecturing her on the proper procedure of rutting her brains out!"
Amaya? Amaya, what you talking about? Amaya... stahp.
No but seriously, Amaya, why are you sitting there realizing they had sex by piecing together the current situation? You literally watched Bade "give up his V-card" just last chapter... while masturbating, quote, "furiously". None of this should be new to you.
Outside the study door, a certain bat-pony mare masturbated furiously with one of her oversized toys while watching through the keyhole, watching as her two superiors screwed each other senseless and leaving a massive wet-spot on the floor as she came again, struggling to stay quiet through her throes of yet another orgasm.
That is you Amaya. Bade isn't any other "bat-pony mare's" superior. Remember yet? You're really cruising for a bruising girl... and by bruising I mean from Applejack... because you stole her title as 'Silliest Pony'. Who's a silly pony,~ You're a silly pony,~ Who is, you is, Applejack,~AMAYA!!! Bumping into gates,~ And knocking over fences,~ Who is, You is, Applejack.~AMAYA!!! (For best effect shout 'Amaya' in a husky, broken voice.)
* - This purple prose is penned and presented proudly. Please don't pique at the precieved provocation.
Oh good. I was afraid that footnote was going to be an apology for the alliteration...
Never apologize for alliteration... EVER. I'mma go cry in the corner over that alliteration's beauty now. I mean what do I have to look forward to now? What can ever top that?
8011459 Perhaps proper perception of pleasure by particularly peculiar persons is preempted by previous play presenting pain.
But the primary purpose of this post is pointing out potential palaver I've painstakingly pondered. Pie provides the pinstriped provider of potions and powders purchasers of her products. The prescriptions prevent the presence of perambulators but possibly not pox and pestilence? The proprietor's participation probably puts paid to potential pestilent problems. Prominent pricks and proud pudendas can properly proceed to play.
"Stupid...everypony's soooo stupid in this town..." Amaya grumbled, her nethers still burning hot as she walked to Twilight's castle alone in the sun, with that only making the burning worse, "SO bucking kinky , the lot of them. The ones who don't want to bind me in chains and whip me want to instead sacrifice my pussy to bucking Tirek or some manure. Those last goth ponies...I swear if they didn't leave after asking me that..."
"A simple rut, either a stallion with his dick in me or mare eating me out or bucking me with a strap-on...how hard is that to ask?"
Sounds like she enjoys S&M as much as I do. Honestly, everytime I see an S&M porn video, or a story on sites like this one, I just sort of roll my eyes and think "Great, another one of these." (Don't worry, I don't leave a million negative comments on said stories. I just avoid reading most of them, and move one.)
Hmm...
Problem: Most everything is in italics, so you'll need to fix that...
I think you missed the opening bracket on this here HTML tag.
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Well, now I have an extra reason to hate Monsieur d'Arms - he broke this chapter's formatting!
*Ahem*
I'm sorry. I don't know what came over me.
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7843625 I fixed it. Sorry about that, and thanks for the heads up.
7843747 Oui, il est un connard. Also, it's fixed. Kicked that pony's con too. :p
Hrm. At the end of the chapter, Amaya seems to realize they've been banging, but wasn't she standing outside the door masturbating last chapter?
Amaya need a dragon cock? Spike where the hell are you? A mare need your assistance.
Is this voluntarily written like this or is it a typo?
*starts tearing up*
That alliteration *sniffles* was just masterfull
7845319 I mean. The biggest question is why so many people think that ponies have hymen to begin with.
Ah, "nobles". At least he'll get his comeuppance. If racism is outlawed in Equestria then it's going to be even better
The two lovebirds have much more fun. And it's glorious!
So Amaya was not satisfied. Well... at least she knows how crazy the town she lives in can be. And that's not even the beginning
I wonder how long will it take until she runs into the other two having fun. Probably not long now.
''but you're still in heat...?''
Yes, and twilight is in the heat too.
This is not a criticism, this is the way you are telling the story, but the animals that have the heat season The heat only passes when the female becomes pregnant or the heat season arrives on the final day, Or a few mares and dogs that get pregnant and the hormones eventually take a while to change They attack any stallions that try to mount them, Instinct of mother activated =) or in some cases the owners give vaccines to pass the heat, some animals in heat can be problem for the tutor.
Interesting, I thought that Amaya would have more problems with his race at pinkie's party
It would be interesting if she had a bit of drama about it, and would explain why she has so many sex toys as it seems that the contraceptive in equestria the mares would get stallions to satisfy them. In short Amaya has so many toys to satisfy their sexual frustrations because with the bad reputation of the batpony she ends up scattering pretenders instead of attracting them.
Anyway your story is divine!
Amaya? Amaya, what you talking about? Amaya... stahp.
No but seriously, Amaya, why are you sitting there realizing they had sex by piecing together the current situation? You literally watched Bade "give up his V-card" just last chapter... while masturbating, quote, "furiously". None of this should be new to you.
That is you Amaya. Bade isn't any other "bat-pony mare's" superior. Remember yet? You're really cruising for a bruising girl... and by bruising I mean from Applejack... because you stole her title as 'Silliest Pony'.
Who's a silly pony,~
You're a silly pony,~
Who is, you is, Applejack,~AMAYA!!!
Bumping into gates,~
And knocking over fences,~
Who is, You is, Applejack.~AMAYA!!!
(For best effect shout 'Amaya' in a husky, broken voice.)
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Oh good. I was afraid that footnote was going to be an apology for the alliteration...
Never apologize for alliteration... EVER. I'mma go cry in the corner over that alliteration's beauty now. I mean what do I have to look forward to now? What can ever top that?
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Perhaps proper perception of pleasure by particularly peculiar persons is preempted by previous play presenting pain.
But the primary purpose of this post is pointing out potential palaver I've painstakingly pondered. Pie provides the pinstriped provider of potions and powders purchasers of her products. The prescriptions prevent the presence of perambulators but possibly not pox and pestilence? The proprietor's participation probably puts paid to potential pestilent problems. Prominent pricks and proud pudendas can properly proceed to play.
to quote a book, you "adore alliteration".
Sounds like she enjoys S&M as much as I do. Honestly, everytime I see an S&M porn video, or a story on sites like this one, I just sort of roll my eyes and think "Great, another one of these." (Don't worry, I don't leave a million negative comments on said stories. I just avoid reading most of them, and move one.)