it being at least fourteen inches long, and easily three inches around
Hm not to nitpick... but three inches of circumference is quite small... the average for a human is almost five [from Wikipedia] I think you mean three inches of diameter that gives something like ten inches around...
If it wasn't for the fact that twilight has zero relationship experience id tell bade to find another mare i can forgive her slightly. Amaya has no excuse she basically used twilights estrus against her by molesting her which impared her judgment it was like getting someone high then fn their brains out. She only relized her feelings for twilight after the seduction and should feel bad for betraying bades trust in her as a friend before that point when it was supposed to be pointless sex.Yah twilight wants to tell bade now after the fact that she slept with another pony. I know its just a story so sorry for my own personal views. Its just I've read a few fimfictions were the mares downplay things due to estrus like yah i did it but im in estrus so its ok with no consequences grrrr.. dont get me wrong im dying for when they hook up for sexy sexy threesome time.
Amaya comforted, before laying and flagging her tail over the side of the bed and her croup on the edge as she laid in the dragon-style* position, presenting her swollen, glistening marehood and plothole ...
It had been so long since she'd had another atop her like this, hooves around her sides and a barrel on her back while a toy or [...] The pony on her back she enjoyed even more, however, alongside the knowledge that true relief was near.
Are they in the Dragon style [missionary] position or are they doing it pony style?
7851733 Hmm It seems that there is a lot less hang up in this Equestria about this kind of things, and that is quite understandable as the estrus is shown as being QUITE uncomfortable, additionally the "heat buddy" custom is seen quite liberally, fundamentally it is comparable to a friend giving a massage to a friend with a backache. Yes Amaya got more involved than she thought she would but that is a different story...
7851835 yah i know im just waiting to see which version of heat buddies the author intends to use the unattached mares version in which amaya used twisted logic to get twilight to see she wasnt technically in a relationship with bade ....try using that logic with shining and cadance after they admitted there feelings to one another and see how far she woulda got with that massage before shining woulda rammed his sword up her whoha....or the other heat buddies version were everything's viewed as fair game and bade was helping rainbow for example to beat the heat too while those two were busy. It's a enjoyable story i just feel bad for bade it just feels like twilight cheated on him and amaya used some shady tactics to do it. Yah i know from the description they all end up together and am looking forward to the threesome i just wanna see how there brought together. 7851835
7851720 the average diameter of an actual stallion's penis, according to Wikipedia, is
0.98 to 2.36 in in diameter with the distal end 15 to 20 cm (5.9 to 7.9 in) and when erect, increases by 3 to 4 times.
So, that would mean 2.94 in - 7.08 in through 3.92 in - 9.44 in in diameter, from smallest range to largest. I'll adjust it to be a 'moderate' 7 in, and adjust Bade's accordingly as well. Thanks for bringing this up. In comparison however, a lion, who the manticore's body is based off of, only has about a 2 inch penis that's only about a half-inch circumference. So there's that.
7851733 It was not molestation. It was completely consensual sex. In addition, in my universe, sex is not as stringent as it is among most humans. Yes, it's (generally) a more private thing, but given ponies have a breeding season unlike humans, and it's incredibly uncomfortable for mares, consensual, protected (magically or herbally) sex during estrus is far more loosely viewed, as is casual sex outside of estrus since a natural, unintended pregnancy is basically impossible. 'Heat buddies' are basically used by unattached, or even attached, mares to help relieve their estruses, akin to having a cramp removed from a muscle and viewed as no more obscene than that. As for Amaya's methods, she'd been asking for weeks before, and Twilight had been considering it. Their shared estruses just finally gave Twilight the final 'push' to accept her offer.
7851736 I fixed this, thanks for pointing it out. I converted the position mid-way through the scene after writing it and having it edited, and forgot to thoroughly scan it.
7851875 Honestly, I didn't intend to depict Amaya as manipulative. Twilight isn't in a relationship with Bade technically at this point. Sure, they love each other, but they never committed themselves to each other given I depict protected, non-breeding sex as very commonplace, especially during estrus, and 'heat buddy' relations are just as common as estrus-relieving sex. Pinkie threw a damn public orgy party for pony's sake! Also, in my universe, I'm sure Shining would be fine with Cadence having a few highly-trusted 'heat buddies', before or after marriage.
7851989 all cool like I said was just waiting to see your version of heat buddies 20 different stories 20 different versions so it's the open version good good Bade breed mares you beautiful stallion breed and show them the awesome might of a Thestral stallion muhahaha you know what they say once you go bat you never go back lol
Hm right not really something strictly for this one but... there is always one thing that puzzles me in all the various fic with the heat/estrus and that is why they have not searched for something that just PREVENTS the heat, like the pill does in humans...
7852626 I view estrus as a 'natural magic' that can't be countered by 'un-natural' unicorn magic. It can be relieved for a while, but not outright ended by unicorn magic. Pregnancy can be prevented, but estrus itself cannot be.
7851733 Last 3 chapters reminded me of a writer on FanFiction.net when Amaya asked Twilight if they specifically said they were together in order to justify having lesbian sex with her. Author I'm reminded of follows the philosophy 'if you aren't married, then it's not cheating'. To him, even if you are engaged to someone and you sleep around behind their back, it's still not cheating in the slightest.
7855277 nah it's just I didn't know yet how Bade was gonna take it. I was hoping for a twilight how could you kinda moment then Amaya admits she was jealousy of bade finding love 1st kinda moment then realizes her true feelings that she was in love with both of them after her and twilight did it kinda moment then a threesomes for like 60 chapters yes I said 60 lol kinda moments. But legion told me it's acceptable in his equestria so it's acceptable and that's that no problems from me there as I said I'm liking his story so far.There were other stories out there were I sigh and delete them after a few chapters but Im dying for the next chapter here . So I expect bade to take his endurance potions and make them and hopefully every mare in ponyvile need wheelchairs for what's left of estrus season. Muhahaha
This is the best clopfic I've ever read. And it doesnt even involve Rainbow Dash *GASP* Classic stallion on mare/ mare on mare action and all through the 1st timer perspective of Twilight. The pacing is just right. You dont need too long to get to the heated parts and you dont rush through them. Also the inner monologues and descriptions about how the acts feel make it quite romantic in a way.
Twilight adapted a much more salacious tone. "Ah, I bet you want me to introduce this phallus into your well lubricated, fertile vaginal canal huh? Make it end up inside of your vaginal fornex and possibly press to your cervix whilst ejaculating this artificial seminal fluid into your uterus? I know I can't inseminate and impregnate you with it...but that doesn't mean I can't try...?" Twilight said in a throaty voice, trying her hoof at sexy talk with a mare, and it was all Amaya could do to not burst out laughing.
oh, twilight... reminds me, again, of a story called "shifting melodies-the lost stanzas" where Twilight's new friends kept saying "your highness" in a sexy tone... and called her "princess of friendship with benefits"!
I wonder what if Twilight forgot to put that spell and Bade impregnate her
Hm not to nitpick... but three inches of circumference is quite small... the average for a human is almost five [from Wikipedia]
I think you mean three inches of diameter that gives something like ten inches around...
7851352 More likely than you might thing, given the author added the fic to the Impregnation group.
If it wasn't for the fact that twilight has zero relationship experience id tell bade to find another mare i can forgive her slightly. Amaya has no excuse she basically used twilights estrus against her by molesting her which impared her judgment it was like getting someone high then fn their brains out. She only relized her feelings for twilight after the seduction and should feel bad for betraying bades trust in her as a friend before that point when it was supposed to be pointless sex.Yah twilight wants to tell bade now after the fact that she slept with another pony. I know its just a story so sorry for my own personal views. Its just I've read a few fimfictions were the mares downplay things due to estrus like yah i did it but im in estrus so its ok with no consequences grrrr.. dont get me wrong im dying for when they hook up for sexy sexy threesome time.
Hm other point of confusion:
Are they in the Dragon style [missionary] position or are they doing it pony style?
Should be pedal
7851733 Hmm It seems that there is a lot less hang up in this Equestria about this kind of things, and that is quite understandable as the estrus is shown as being QUITE uncomfortable, additionally the "heat buddy" custom is seen quite liberally, fundamentally it is comparable to a friend giving a massage to a friend with a backache. Yes Amaya got more involved than she thought she would but that is a different story...
7851721 haha can;t wait to see it
7851835 yah i know im just waiting to see which version of heat buddies the author intends to use the unattached mares version in which amaya used twisted logic to get twilight to see she wasnt technically in a relationship with bade ....try using that logic with shining and cadance after they admitted there feelings to one another and see how far she woulda got with that massage before shining woulda rammed his sword up her whoha....or the other heat buddies version were everything's viewed as fair game and bade was helping rainbow for example to beat the heat too while those two were busy. It's a enjoyable story i just feel bad for bade it just feels like twilight cheated on him and amaya used some shady tactics to do it. Yah i know from the description they all end up together and am looking forward to the threesome i just wanna see how there brought together.
7851835
7851736 Yes, I re-read the passage. Thought it was just me.
7851352 I guess you'll have to see~!
7851720 the average diameter of an actual stallion's penis, according to Wikipedia, is
So, that would mean 2.94 in - 7.08 in through 3.92 in - 9.44 in in diameter, from smallest range to largest. I'll adjust it to be a 'moderate' 7 in, and adjust Bade's accordingly as well. Thanks for bringing this up. In comparison however, a lion, who the manticore's body is based off of, only has about a 2 inch penis that's only about a half-inch circumference. So there's that.
7851721 That it is.
7851733 It was not molestation. It was completely consensual sex. In addition, in my universe, sex is not as stringent as it is among most humans. Yes, it's (generally) a more private thing, but given ponies have a breeding season unlike humans, and it's incredibly uncomfortable for mares, consensual, protected (magically or herbally) sex during estrus is far more loosely viewed, as is casual sex outside of estrus since a natural, unintended pregnancy is basically impossible. 'Heat buddies' are basically used by unattached, or even attached, mares to help relieve their estruses, akin to having a cramp removed from a muscle and viewed as no more obscene than that. As for Amaya's methods, she'd been asking for weeks before, and Twilight had been considering it. Their shared estruses just finally gave Twilight the final 'push' to accept her offer.
7851736 I fixed this, thanks for pointing it out. I converted the position mid-way through the scene after writing it and having it edited, and forgot to thoroughly scan it.
7851740 Fixed.
7851835 Basically this, 7851733 .
7851849 You'll have to wait and see!
7851875 Honestly, I didn't intend to depict Amaya as manipulative. Twilight isn't in a relationship with Bade technically at this point. Sure, they love each other, but they never committed themselves to each other given I depict protected, non-breeding sex as very commonplace, especially during estrus, and 'heat buddy' relations are just as common as estrus-relieving sex. Pinkie threw a damn public orgy party for pony's sake! Also, in my universe, I'm sure Shining would be fine with Cadence having a few highly-trusted 'heat buddies', before or after marriage.
7851903 Yep, it's fixed.
7851989 all cool like I said was just waiting to see your version of heat buddies 20 different stories 20 different versions so it's the open version good good Bade breed mares you beautiful stallion breed and show them the awesome might of a Thestral stallion muhahaha you know what they say once you go bat you never go back lol
Hm right not really something strictly for this one but... there is always one thing that puzzles me in all the various fic with the heat/estrus and that is why they have not searched for something that just PREVENTS the heat, like the pill does in humans...
7852626 It's too much fun to bother preventing it?
7852626 I view estrus as a 'natural magic' that can't be countered by 'un-natural' unicorn magic. It can be relieved for a while, but not outright ended by unicorn magic. Pregnancy can be prevented, but estrus itself cannot be.
Or what 7853982 said.
7852194 I fixed it, thanks.
7851733 Last 3 chapters reminded me of a writer on FanFiction.net when Amaya asked Twilight if they specifically said they were together in order to justify having lesbian sex with her. Author I'm reminded of follows the philosophy 'if you aren't married, then it's not cheating'. To him, even if you are engaged to someone and you sleep around behind their back, it's still not cheating in the slightest.
7855277 nah it's just I didn't know yet how Bade was gonna take it. I was hoping for a twilight how could you kinda moment then Amaya admits she was jealousy of bade finding love 1st kinda moment then realizes her true feelings that she was in love with both of them after her and twilight did it kinda moment then a threesomes for like 60 chapters yes I said 60 lol kinda moments. But legion told me it's acceptable in his equestria so it's acceptable and that's that no problems from me there as I said I'm liking his story so far.There were other stories out there were I sigh and delete them after a few chapters but Im dying for the next chapter here . So I expect bade to take his endurance potions and make them and hopefully every mare in ponyvile need wheelchairs for what's left of estrus season. Muhahaha
This is the best clopfic I've ever read. And it doesnt even involve Rainbow Dash *GASP*
Classic stallion on mare/ mare on mare action and all through the 1st timer perspective of Twilight. The pacing is just right. You dont need too long to get to the heated parts and you dont rush through them. Also the inner monologues and descriptions about how the acts feel make it quite romantic in a way.
Ok. Front page says update but there is nothing here. What is going on?
7884064 I accidentally published the next, incomplete chap. Sorry about that.
Damn. You could have gone with cocks and pussies, but you chickened out.
8498082
No, I actually intentionally avoided that.
oh, twilight...
reminds me, again, of a story called "shifting melodies-the lost stanzas" where Twilight's new friends kept saying "your highness" in a sexy tone...
and called her "princess of friendship with benefits"!