Please can you replace these with Anon or choose a name? It's easy for us to mentally substitute Anon for our name in our minds.
I'm sure (your name) won't mind another taking a cold one."
taking another
After a little detour to the bathroom, she then stripped down, removing all article of clothing and the enter the shower, turn it on and let water poured on her body.
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"Come on aria, I thought you be happy to see me here."
Aria you'd
You the start to massage them, while she was trying to suppress her moans.
delete 'the'
"Please Aria, let me show *."
* = you
As your tounges was dancing, you resume your work on her pussy.
tongues were
now facing her soaking wet sex, you leans in and then start to lick her pussy.
lean I'm guessing she fell asleep at
She just sat there trying to figure out a way to relax,
7499416 thnx for the feedbacks, I thought using (your name) would, but if you insist on changing them to Anon, then I'll make that change, along with the other errors I made. The proofreader I have, it's not an advance version, so it won't show me the major mistakes I made. Anyways, glad your liking it so far.
Please can you replace these with Anon or choose a name? It's easy for us to mentally substitute Anon for our name in our minds.
taking another
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Aria
you'd
delete 'the'
* = you
tongues were
lean
I'm guessing she fell asleep at
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Later in the story you could use this shower scene in reverse once they get better acquainted, but with Aria sneaking in as she has the more aggressive personality, it sounds more feasible.
7499416 thnx for the feedbacks, I thought using (your name) would, but if you insist on changing them to Anon, then I'll make that change, along with the other errors I made. The proofreader I have, it's not an advance version, so it won't show me the major mistakes I made. Anyways, glad your liking it so far.
7499284 The proofreader I have is not an advance version so it doesn't show the major errors I made, but thanks anyway.
7499289 well the thing is that she asked for forgiveness afterwards, the sirens however didn't not
7499416 she was asleep the entire time until her alarm woke her up.
The fact that this was a dream makes me feel better. I would never do that to anyone. At least not with sexual intent. Only violent.
It does makes sense that it was a dream. Nice work on this chapter.