You got to get a good look at the necklace be for you took it paid for it and took it with you.
before
How about a sing her ? romantic song?
Should be 'I' ? = a (insert)
"Aria?" you were worried that she might be in trouble, so you shoved her give in your pocket, quickly opened the door and rushed inside.
gift
I mean, I guess it wasn't entirely his fault, he did thought I was in trouble because of my yelling.
think
"Why did I just stood there watching her masturbate!?
stand
"for the past week, I've been having these feeling for you , I tried to suppress them but the keep coming up and it's driving me crazy."
they About Kentucky time! (edit; referring to their relationship not time between postings, only thought in hindsight how that sounded. ) Although for proof I thought he might have pulled out the necklace and pronounce he'd just picked it up and was about to give it to her. That would have been extremely convincing, I think. Another good chapter.
No, the timings within the 'perfect range'. Even though I thought that he'd pull out the necklace and ask if it was good enough proof. Otherwise, fantastic thus far! Can't wait to finish it!
before
Should be 'I'
? = a (insert)
gift
think
stand
they
About Kentucky time! (edit; referring to their relationship not time between postings, only thought in hindsight how that sounded. ) Although for proof I thought he might have pulled out the necklace and pronounce he'd just picked it up and was about to give it to her. That would have been extremely convincing, I think.
Another good chapter.
No, the timings within the 'perfect range'. Even though I thought that he'd pull out the necklace and ask if it was good enough proof. Otherwise, fantastic thus far! Can't wait to finish it!