Great, dream sequence posed on the other hoof. can't wait for the morning breakfast scene, should be awkward, interesting, maybe confrontational? Only spotted one space missing but as I found nothing else, didn't think it worth pointing out, so well done on the writing skills sir, much improved!
Great, dream sequence posed on the other hoof. can't wait for the morning breakfast scene, should be awkward, interesting, maybe confrontational?
Only spotted one space missing but as I found nothing else, didn't think it worth pointing out, so well done on the writing skills sir, much improved!
7507529 sorry
Nice work on this chapter.