You the then reached ? the bottom of her shirt and pulled it up making, you had to separate so you can take it off of her.
delete this 'the' ? = for (insert) A small rewording, 'pulled it up, forcing you to separate'
you thought as you grabbed one of her breast over the bra and started to massage it.
'her breasts in her bra'
'he's about as big as the dildo,if not any bigger.'
Space after dildo, 'any' to 'somewhat'
So how about we help each other finished our dreams."
finish
With that, she continued her work on your shaft.
Suggestion? 'With that, she continued by deep throating your shaft to the hilt.'
"I guess it's it's just instincts," you chuckled a little, "so you ready for the main event?"
it's-it's (stick a hyphen in there as a pause)
You raised an Eyebrow, "What?"
eyebrow (lower case)
"Damn," you said, "Damn you're tighter than thought."
Change to 'I expected'
You gave ? ass another squeeze as you thrust harder, making the bed creak a little.
? = her
After a few minutes, you both separated ? as you # reached your limits
? = from lip-lock to breathe, (insert this just to indicate they didn't separate at the hips.) # = both also need full stop at end of sentence.
"I would never do that, I promise," you said with a sincere smile and a little fear, knowing ? what she is capable.
"After what you were just able to do for me, I would never do that, I promise," (maybe an additional bit of sincerity for extra reassurance to Aria) ? = of Damn, that was a hot chapter, keeping us interested til the end for sure! Handful of fixes and it's perfect.
delete this 'the'
? = for (insert)
A small rewording, 'pulled it up, forcing you to separate'
'her breasts in her bra'
Space after dildo,
'any' to 'somewhat'
finish
Suggestion? 'With that, she continued by deep throating your shaft to the hilt.'
it's-it's (stick a hyphen in there as a pause)
eyebrow (lower case)
Change to 'I expected'
? = her
? = from lip-lock to breathe, (insert this just to indicate they didn't separate at the hips.)
# = both
also need full stop at end of sentence.
"After what you were just able to do for me, I would never do that, I promise," (maybe an additional bit of sincerity for extra reassurance to Aria)
? = of
Damn, that was a hot chapter, keeping us interested til the end for sure! Handful of fixes and it's perfect.
Someone forgot about a condom! XD