You and aria were in the living room watching your favorite show
Aria
but at least she doesn't leave ? much of a mess on it then before.
Maybe put 'as' in here? Even 'then' could be another 'as'.
"Like I would know, there nothing good to watch these days."
there's I agree with Aria on this sentiment, If it's not reality TV for one, it's politically correct & chlorinated to death crap!
"OK, I might have underestimated you, but don't think it gonna happen again."
it's
After about a few hours of playing, the sun had set so you decided to play one more match.
Now I'm reminded of this...
'Dammit, I wish I can just tell him how I feel and get it off my chest, but it so difficult. This is not something I'm used too. 'She
it's Last apostrophe one space to left to finish thought phrase. ...start of next chapter Anon tries to sneak up on Aria, 'What's that buzzing sound?' This is great!
Aria
Maybe put 'as' in here? Even 'then' could be another 'as'.
there's
I agree with Aria on this sentiment, If it's not reality TV for one, it's politically correct & chlorinated to death crap!
it's
Now I'm reminded of this...
it's
Last apostrophe one space to left to finish thought phrase.
...start of next chapter Anon tries to sneak up on Aria, 'What's that buzzing sound?'
This is great!
7566537 actually I have something different planned for the next chapter.
Meh. I'm a Mortal Kombat X guy myself. Why? BECAUSE FINISH HIM, THAT'S WHY!!!
I am unstoppable as Cody in street fighter.