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General Tyrus
Good day everyone, I'm General Tyrus, and I think it was wonderful that you've decided to look at this poor excuse of a profile. I enjoy writing and reading, and I hope you do as well. Cheers!
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Where is Rey Tanner from?
7504046 Ray Tanner, is an old character I made up for a Mutants & Masterminds game. The character was a ranged and Stealth based character. I figured I'd use him, since I keep my character's documented. I thank you for your interest. I hope the answer was what you hoped for.
Interesting so far, I look forward to more.
7505934 I thank your for you comment, and do be happy I try to update frequently.
Edit 1#: Sorry if that sounded rude.
Good chapter.
I would say ray is digging a hole for himself, but it seems that this Equestria is a tad more unclean than the one we expect. Morally speaking, that is.
Sucks to be him in the near future, but i admire his effort to profit himself in all efforts.
He feels like a low intelligence high charisma high wisdom build.
Good chapter.
7511715 I do thank you for your imput, and I would agree. He's more for the now than later.
Good day.
Applebloom is having bad dreams about timberwolves and dangerous ponies that only Ray can she trust to take them out.
Luna is dark.
Clearly the EoH purged NMM from Luna while leaving all of her source personality intact, including the parts the spawned NMM.
Good chapter.
7515531 I thank you for the comment good sir.
Ray is having a lot of ponies go with his flow. Is that charisma, or has Celestia detected something new?
Good chapter!
hm this is very interesting can't wait to read what happens next
7527514 I thank you for the interest
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Smells like Luna is setting up a civil war, but with her supporters getting the tech advantage this time.
While this isn't one of the best HIE stories, I have to give you real serious credit for not committing the major sins of the HIE genre. Because of that I'm recommending your story to several people.
Your protagonist is intelligent. He is mature and acts as if he has a thorough understanding of the world around him. In many of these types of story, the authors seem to create rather sheltered and sexually inexperienced protagonists. The funny thing is that I don't believe that they do this on purpose. They then stick these shut-ins in tense, complex, and life threatening situations that this type of personality would never have the experience or insight to be able to solve. The shut-in then solves the problem like an expert. Your Character actually comes across as a street smart old guy whome you can tell, through your writing, has real world experience.
On first encounter with tiny talking ponies, he doesn't loose all bowel control and act like a total lunatic. My biggest pet peeve in these stories is when the human over reacts to the first encounter. They are pastel colored ponies with technicolor hair, who stand at about crotch level. (depending on whose head cannon you go by). They arn't the predator, or a raptor, and yet I read of humans fainting, kicking one into a tree, pulling a knife on one, and other very bizarre way over the top behaviors. Yours calmly takes in the oddity of things, then simply says hello from a reasonable distance. Great job.
I will say one humorous thing that you may not realize. Your writing has a cadence to it. You see, I don't actually read these stories. I have a Mac, and Macs come with a very good text to speech system. When you use the Ava voice and tell it to start reading, you can't tell its a machine. It sounds just like a humans reading to you. (It makes some pronunciation mistakes though.) When I fed your story into it, I found certain parts sounded like a song. Specifically the "He said, She said" parts have a real beat to them. Do do, do do, he said.....do do, do do, she said....do do, do do, he said....do do, do do, she said. I was washing dishes at the time and caught myself bouncing to the beat. Absolute truth.
Great job on the story
7546575 You have no idea how much I enjoyed reading this comment, and I thank you greatly for it, I do hope I can continue to keep you entertained.
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It might be a while. Though I do appreciate your interest in the story!