Well, that was rather sudden. Seriously, the entire reason she approached him was to help him get with Rarity, but now she's upset? This just comes out of nowhere.
7466493 Yeah, rather than implying that Rainbow wanted the Spike the whole time at the end this should have made some clues that she was interested in him before or suggest that his performance was winning over her heart throughout the story so far.
At least is could have had a softer suggestion like, "I thought maybe you had changed you mind" and then a sigh or a single tear rolls down Rainbow's cheek. Regret would make sense but heartbreak seem a little much.
Like you said, the whole point was Rainbow offering to help Spike hookup with Rarity.
Comment posted by Trollmario deleted Aug 12th, 2016
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We shall see Warlocky.
charade confirmed!
I can't wait to see what more Rainbow's gonna do with Spike
Is it wrong I want that I want SpikeDash rather than Sparity?
I really wanted to see Rainbow teach Spike moves to really win Rarity over, not fall for him (or that she was already in love with him or something).
Still gonna read though.
Why didn't Dash just admit her feelings? Especially after she took his first time, I'm sure he would have openly accepted her.
and Now i love this story
Ahh spike dash is great
Well, that was rather sudden. Seriously, the entire reason she approached him was to help him get with Rarity, but now she's upset? This just comes out of nowhere.
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Not really. Rarity is really a bitch, even in canon. Rainbow Dash is a bit annoying with her ego, but better than Rarity.
7466493 Yeah, rather than implying that Rainbow wanted the Spike the whole time at the end this should have made some clues that she was interested in him before or suggest that his performance was winning over her heart throughout the story so far.
At least is could have had a softer suggestion like, "I thought maybe you had changed you mind" and then a sigh or a single tear rolls down Rainbow's cheek. Regret would make sense but heartbreak seem a little much.
Like you said, the whole point was Rainbow offering to help Spike hookup with Rarity.
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You mean Spash?
There it is!