It feels the same.

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The whole story was actually remastered. He just had to get rid of a chapter because it was merged with another chapter. Probably deleted and uploaded the last chapter to let people know.

I think this story was pretty good, at least, the plot was.

As for the actual, physical story, I still think it left some to be desired. Maybe in the future you can remaster this, as I know it would only end in something good.

All in all, I like it, and stories like this give me little bits of inspiration to write something on a similar subject. I like it and keep writing stories like this.

7/10

+1 rep

Very nice, striking a balance between simple and detailed that is tough. And ending it with a call back to your first chapter is a nice touch.

What happened to the short chapter?

Loved it.

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Thank you. Glad to hear it

I really liked this story. It was well written and very well descriptive. I give you a 9 out of 10. Is there going to be a sequel by any chance?

Chapter 1 feels drastically different from the rest of the story. I'm glad I got through it without dropping the story, but I'm a little confused as to why the first chapter is so dull, especially compared to the rest of the story.