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There's going to be demons right like the whole oblivion elder scrolls right right
"You will." Jeff said. "I'm taking you guys to the Oblivion Gate now."
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I'm surprised no one made an Elder Scrolls reference.
I mean I thought one of them would then.
Like : "Whoah. Did you say Oblivion Gate? Man if Mehrunes Dagon comes through I'm outta here."
This feels like the opening few scenes of Call of duty advanced warfare with less limb snapping atleast
Dr hardy is voiced by jeff goldblum in my head.
that was a good line right there caught me off guard
I am not sure but is this a robo cop refrence here, as in the new one?
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No actually it wasn't. Glad you're enjoying the story!
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I found that quite hilarious as well.
I'm sorry the moment someone says we spared no expense I would of been like nope I've seen this movie and quit the job there are some lines you just don't say such as lest split up gang, what's the worst that could happen, I've got this and now I'm adding down the rabbit hole we go.
Thank you Mr Hammond.
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i lick the way you thank
A Jurassic Park reference, I see.
Garry Hardy doesn't seem all that bad at socialization. I think it would have made more sense to make him more eccentric, or just worse at dealing with others. He comes off as a 'cool guy' and not a 'socially awkward' character.
Anyway, it wasn't all that bad; I quite liked the scientific jargon, and I wish it would have been expanded further. But with what was given, it is also fine.
As I mentioned in my last comment, I looked into the writing itself: I found that there was, indeed, several errors. But nothing too grievous.
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Please pm me with any errors you find so that I may fix them, thank you!
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For some reason I imagine him sounding like Kleiner from Half-Life (one with pet headcrab in later establishment)