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Jack Hammer


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And the anomaly that they're going into leads to Equestria.

Were those, uh, THINGS from the Everfree forest?

So, MLP exists in the universe the humans are from.

I hope Discord lives. Also, WHAT THE HELL WAS ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THAT PORTAL?!?! HELL?!?!?!

Well crap... that went downhill fast.....

A vomit-fest.:raritydespair: Between Fluttershy and Rarity.:raritycry:

So whatever crawled out of H.P. Lovecraft's mind is now trying to make Celestia go insane? At least she decided to talk to someone about it.

I sense shipping between Emmy and Chris.

Well, that escalated quickly.

One: LOVECRAFT WAS RIGHT!!! He had gazed upon the OLD GODS!!! And he probably didn't even know it.

Two: Shipping intensifies.

Doesn't Trixie's magic have a pink color? Also, when did she arrive on Earth?

This is what Trixie's magic looks like: pre13.deviantart.net/852d/th/pre/i/2013/173/5/3/pony_troll_by_kyekai-d6a66fu.png

I hope that they don't have to nuke the place.

Those ponies had better be brought back.

Comment posted by Jack Hammer deleted Jun 20th, 2016

This is just a thought, but if you were looking to ensure maximum amount of views and exposure, you might have wanted to wait a little while between posting chapters. I only came across this by accident, and I had not even seen it on the front page despite it looking okay after glancing through the first chapter.

Just a thought.

Comment posted by Jack Hammer deleted Jun 20th, 2016

7320706 Thanks. Does that put it back on the front page for each chapter?

7319677 Planning on it. Might be a year or more though. That's about how long it took me to make this one... Glad you enjoyed it!

7320751 I'm glad to hear that you're going to make a sequel.:yay:

Hey dude, why don't you stagger your releases? Your story will just get lost to the flow of new stories that come in daily and people won't get a chance to read this. Hell the only reason I even found this is because I was searching specifically for completed stories with minimum 100k words sorted by last update.

Wait a tick... *squnits* Why are Fluttershy and AJ not tagged? *looks up at gore tag* I think Im done here, I have no time to be crying today.

7320746 That would send it back to the front page for a bit, but I would highly suggest checking with one of the moderators or admins about this first. I seem to recall explicit rules against this, but they might make an allowance for your particular situation, and could in all honesty offer better advice than me.

7321070 Thanks for your input. I have updated the description and character tags to be more accurate. FYI this story is science fiction, not grimdark/sad/gore.

Sience + Guns = technological advanced guns
technological advanced guns = future
USAF academy = future

ITS THE AIR FORCE ACADEMY ON STEROIDS.
I MEAN EXTREME×9999999999999999 STEROIDS.

Ok i give up i cant find a meme for this.

7317182 worse probably war of some sort war will always be hell or worse.

You know how annoying it is when your BDU/ABU trousers are to short but to big around the waist? Its very annoying getting my riggers belt adjusted properly.
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Well McAllister brought the ancient Chinese curse down upon them all. Why oh why did he wish for something interesting to happen. Combined with the project named Oblivion? This is like sticking your middle finger at fate and daring it to do it's worst.

Interesting so far. Will give this fic a gander.

By the way releasing the fic one chapter a day would have let more people see it in the updated section on the front page. Anything after the first chapter in a day and the additional chapters will not show up on the front page. It is to prevent chapter spam from peeps that write tiny chapters.

Huh? I thought that the Stargate did not connect to the remote island. I thought that there were going to take a boat to get there.

"Won't... Come... Out!"
The kids plowed into her. A huge SPLAT of hot sauce sprayed out over her entire plate. She quickly jammed a forkful in her mouth. "Ooooh! Perfect!" she drooled, tears in her eyes from the heat, and hugged the excited children. "Thank you!"

XD

If any of the photographs were shot in RAW, there are going to be people that can prove that the photographs are not faked. Not that it matters all that much. By this time most of the Earth governments should have been informed about the hole in the universe and the eldritch abominations leaking out of it. That and been informed of new allies that can potentially help with said eldritch abominations.

7317491 im just picturing it as an infinite gif, dear god please help us all.


Dear god its stand by me Barf-O-Rama all over again.
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I looked up the image of Shub-Niggurath and found one image that each time i look at it my eyes burn sting and itch at the same time.
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I never want to see this again. Ever.

7319326 it goes deeper than intensification it goes past that and even deeper into some matrix /inception /2001 a space odyssey, shit

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I just realized, what happens if the nuke acts oike independence day and does no damage to the beasts.
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7327282 yeah i rather not have another Eldritch Abomination, and rather not try to rethink the fabric of reality again, I already had my brain crash once I rather it not happen again.

Just finished reading it, and holy shit my brain crashed.
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This story is so beautiful I DON'T EVEN.

7327284 I have no idea i just google barf gif or something like that it was like 32 hours ago i dont remember.

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