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Damnit David, you gave her a blank check! Never give them a blank check!
Well, time for that GORE tag and a new story, DA.
Nice. Very romantic, can't wait to see what happens next! Break that princess shell
I don't see why he didn't want to at least give Luna an abridged version of the date the night before. She is pretty much on his side in this getting Celestia to open up and join them. I think Luna would find it a bit funny that he basically got her to relax a bit by playing tag. Even though Celestia thought that a boop on the nose was hitting her?
7715872 Actually that would be a really good idea for the next chapter a complete retelling or just luna's reaction to the dates, or maybe this could come after Celestia is accepted into the group. the latter i would prefer because "IT'S ONLY A MATTER OF TIME NOW!" Famous last words.
writer *looks to author* can it be done?
7716979 Also, you keep saying dour... What's that even mean?
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I've come to realise haven't given enough praise for this comment or shown my gratitude for Kevin's insightful wit. It's comments (and PMs) like these that make me want to start an AU storyline just based on the reactions I get from readers. It would be a lot of fun but would also likely break my fingers and drive me insane.
Oh, yeah. Gratitude.
Thanks, Kevin! You, and others like you, make it fun to be an amateur writer!
Look forward to "(TA1) - Todd's Adventures," coming, hopefully, never. (P.S. Please don't try to kill off my characters!)
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Sorry, I missed this Q. Luna's reactions to Davelestia's© dates are in "Act XXVIII - The Best of Intentions."
(Hah, just coined that. I'm terrible!)
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David's a weird dude with old-world sensibilities. Even though he knows Luna's on-board (heck, it was her idea), he values his private time with the elder sister (for good reason too!) The sisters will eventually hash it out together in XXVIII.
Yeah, Celestia was way too tense that whole night. All boops aside, I doubt the princess has had many experiences with others invading her personal space.
explain this?
um....
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A finger sandwich is a fancy term for a small sandwich, one that you can hold between your pointer finger, middle finger and thunb
daisies are poisonous. And so are meadow.
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Perhaps the magic pool also carries certain immunity towards the pony diet