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Long before Celestia became the ruler of Equestria, Chaos brought havoc to the realm, and I'm not talking about Discord. When Celestia and Luna came into power they had just defeated the Chaos, though not forever. In order to keep harmony balanced in Equestria they needed to maintain a friendship, one that powers the elements. The 9 elements of Harmony. The powerful artifacts were created when Celestia and Luna defeated the Chaos and became the rightful rulers of Equestria. Soon, Luna became jealous of Celestia, Celestia had all the glory and power, she was the sister who was known, she was the Princess who was every-ponies favorite. Luna decided that there could only be one Princess in Equestria and... yeh, you know the rest. After using the elements of Harmony against her sister, they turned into stone and both Celestia and Luna lost their connection to the elements. Without the elements being active, and with Luna's recent outburst, harmony began to falter in Equestria. Eventually, though, the main 6 elements became active again, with a new bearer each to hold off the rising chaos.
---- Now with the Princess missing, the Chaos returning and an ancient prophecy, Twilight and her friends must find and unravel the prophecy to discover the other three elements, who bears them and what sort of power can defeat the rising Chaos.

I am terrible at writing as the main 6, so there will probably be a lot of OOC. sorry. this is my second fanfic [first to contain the main 6] so I would appreciate it if anyone could give me tips and pointers to help improve characteristics and the story in general.

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Comments ( 15 )

Wait, isn't rainbow's wing broken how is she flying :rainbowhuh::rainbowderp:

I love it so far can't wait for next chapter :pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss:

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Oh yeh... umm, Magic???
Good spot, thanks. OOH! that just gave me an idea, something happens later on in the story, you'll know it when it happens.
Thanks.

This story is so good :rainbowkiss: , I would never guess it was a dream. Can't wait for another chapter to see what Nightmare Moon and mane 6 will do. :pinkiehappy:

"CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS:PROPHECY COMPLETERS! YAY!"

And suddenly Nightmare Moon felt a massive chill down her spine, as if she made a terrible mistake.:rainbowlaugh:

I love the concept you gave them powers and not just shiny neclases that shoot rainbow. I can't wait to find out what powers the others have, I hope you update soon. I really wonder where this story will lead!! :heart:

Take your first fave, like, and comment for this story, It's great. :pinkiehappy:
EDIT: OK, 8th comment, but I'm at least the first one to like your story. :derpytongue2:

I think Paul should join them. I think he could help them in some way, like defending them from Nightmare Moon or something..Can't wait for the next chapter :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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I'm still writing it, sorry, School is making the going slow.

7599497 yay can't wait and I know how you feel :twilightsheepish:

Did not expect that :pinkiegasp:

When is the next chapter? :fluttershysad:

I am terrible at writing as the main 6, so there will probably be a lot of OOC. sorry.

Have you tried the group Authors Helping Authors?

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