Life in Crystal Prep was a pain in the ass. But when you work through your tough times, patience is rewarded when Dawn finally gets Transferred. That's when his Principle, Cinch, doesn't realize your potential until the upcoming Friendship Games... by granting your transfer to Canterlot High.
Rated Teen for use of excessive violent language in later chapters.
The 'sad' Tag is for scenes of depressing memories in early(maybe) and later chapters.
Adding the Gore tag for graphic scenes in dreams, about dawns past.
Chapters (2)
Try to narrative that story. So far it's alright it's a 7/10 above average.
The last part was kinda rushed, but it wasn't bad. Also, a second person story means that the readers are the protagonist and you're using first person.
>>Elic Bullet Understood, I'm gonna remove the 2nd person tag. Also Thanks.
>>Rye Snoot I'll Give it a go. Thanks for the info.
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You're welcome.