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I'm sorry but this... This can't be considered proper reading material. Too many errors and the story is just unintelligible. Just my opinion though, you shouldn't stop writing , just practice and maybe ask a friend to read through it before you post.
Thank you for the feed back. It is my first so I'm not expecting everpony to like it and I appreciate you letting me know your thoughts. I do have people go through and read before I post. They said that it was good so I figured I'd post. But thank you for not just blatantly saying it was utter crap I shouldn't write anymore
@Lil_Davey I thought that it was quite a good story so don't complain because they most likely did better than you
7144815 O.o thanks?
I realy like this story. It was much better than i expected. Keep writing, i want to read more