Glow stared at the two humans, a frown on her lips.
She was not sure this was going to work, at all. She knew all about magical spells and how they operated. She could, in theory, teach a class on unicorn magic. She could probably teach a pony how to use it, even. If they had some basic understanding of how magic worked.
But neither of them had ever USED magic. Magic was something that was developed over a life time of practice and hard work. It was a muscle that needed to be trained and harnessed, developed. Would they even be able to use magic? Would the bodies they’d have be able to? And what if they could, but it was only weak magic, what if they didn’t HAVE the abilities of their Equestrian counterparts? She didn’t know anypony who had tested the transfer in the other direction. For all she knew they only got the body, not the magic, of their counterparts.
Even worse, what if they didn’t even get that? Equestria was incredibly magical. This world wasn’t. What if the ‘transformation’ only occurred BECAUSE of the magic inside her? What if they STAYED human? What if they did succeed, and had all the power needed, and could use it, but then Nightmare Moon decided to take it? There were so many things that could go wrong. And if any of them did, then she’d be dooming these two generous humans who offered to aid her. For the thousandth time, she pushed those thoughts away. There was no time to focus on what could go wrong now. She had to focus on doing what had to be done to save everypony.
“Okay. Now, I want you to close your eyes, and imagine a kind of… energy, flowing through your body. It starts at the feet, and flows up, through your entire being, all the way to your hor-- forehead.”
The two nodded, closing their eyes and focusing.
She’d have given anything to have the two with horns, so they could fully practice. But there was no way to do that here. They’d have to keep practicing.
“Now, imagine all this energy bursting out of you, like a magical spray of water, blasting through. Throwing your energy itself, in a direct form, at whatever you desire. While the beam, itself, will be straight, the target will be whatever you focus it on. Direct it at. It will be difficult at first, but… well, if you were going to be there for long, it’d be second nature within a few days.”
Once again, the two tried. Though she had no idea if they would be able to do it. She tried to focus on the basics. ‘Blasting’. The most simple spell a combat pony could do. What she wouldn’t give to have Moondancer with her. That mare could probably have taken on Chrysalis herself. Or Rainbow, that mare was tough. She’d have probably flown up and then crashed into the giant bug, crushing her. Or Applejack. Now there was a mare she doubted would lose to some giant changeling.
“Imagine the energy flowing out, through your entire body. Slowly gather it, and push. Magic is a complex science, but the basic principles are simple. Just push, from your ho-- forehead.”
She was just a writer. Being an earth pony wasn’t so bad, if she had trained for combat. Maybe joined the guard. But she hadn’t. She spent most of her days writing new books and stories. Well, and keeping Nightmare Moon under control. Ish. As best she could. She wasn’t a fighter. Her only real weapon was her brain. She was stronger and had more stamina than a lot of unicorns and pegasi, but not enough to actually fight.
“Now. Focus on forming a kind of… dome, from the magic you’d be gathering. Envision it as a small, thin wall made of a very powerful material.”
“Like steel?” Shining asked.
“Exactly. Just imagine it like that...”
For days she trained them, and with each one she felt more and more dread. They’d go to their classes, then come back to practice and try to learn, to envision something they had no basis for. She admired their dedication, their strength. They didn’t complain. Didn’t object. They had no way of knowing if what they were doing would even mean anything, but they still tried their hardest and didn’t give up. How could she not admire them for it?
And they were doing it for her. For her people. She could see so much of her brother and his old friend in them. The kindness. The generosity. The ponies she depended on. And she prayed to the stars above it wouldn’t be in vain.
She tried so hard to block it out until the moment came. Sparkle’s device sprang to life, alerting them it was time. That it was finally time. They all had classes…
But when night fell, they would step in and head across the portal. And, if they were lucky, save Nightmare Moon.
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The drive was much, much, MUCH smoother with Shining behind the wheel. However, the moment they arrived, Glow instantly felt a small burst of dread. There was that girl again, Sunset. Her arms were crossed and she was standing outside the portal.
Glow got out of the car first, making her way towards the girl and readying herself for a fight. She’d be bucked if she was going to allow some brat stop her from saving her home.
“I’m sorry,” Sunset said, making her pause and almost stumble over.
“W-what?”
“I said, I’m sorry. You were right. I was wrong.” She pointed a thumb at the portal. “I’ve been testing it every day. I knew now that it was active, you’d come back. So… I just… I wanted you to know I was sorry.”
Glow blinked a few times, staring. Finally, she spoke up. “You… are? Really? Does that mean you’ll help?”
“Yeah. I’m coming with you,” Sunset said, giving a small smile. “It’s the least I can do. After all… its my home, too. And we’re all friends here, right?” she asked.
Glow felt a small warmth spread through her heart. She couldn’t believe it. This girl really WAS Celestia’s student. She could finally see just a bit of Moondancer in her. “Yes, we are. Okay everypo-- body! Are you ready?”
Cadence and Shining nodded. “As ready as we’ll ever be. We--”
“Wait, ready? What are all of… your entourage doing?” Sunset asked, her voice clouded with suspicion.
Glow smiled. “They’re coming with us, to try and--”
“Oh HECK no!” Sunset snapped, shaking her head.
“E-excuse me?” Cadence said. “We’re here to help, we--”
“And how are you going to help?” Sunset asked, glaring.
Shining spoke up. “Well, our alter-egos had magic, so it is likely--”
“No,” Sunset said, shaking her head. “Dear heavens, what did you almost do?” she asked, glaring at Glow. “They can’t go through.”
Glow gulped. “But they--”
“Are not ponies. They don’t know the first thing about being a pony. They’d have to spend the first few minutes learning how to walk! Let alone doing magic. They could have gotten killed.”
“B-but they--”
“I’m coming with you, not them. I’m sorry, but this is for your own good.”
“The two of us can’t just--”
“Did you forget? I was Celestia’s prized student. More importantly, I WAS a pony. I have experience. I can get you to Nightmare Moon, and help you alert everypony. But I can’t do it AND keep all of them safe at the same time.”
Shining flushed. “I-I don’t need someone to protect me. I can--”
“You really can’t,” Sunset said, shaking her head. “Listen, I get it. She comes here, makes those sad eyes, apparently lectures people and has a mean right hook, you want to help her. To be the hero, that’s fine. But this is just going to get her and you all killed, or worse. I have experience. More importantly, I have the power you need. You know how good I had to have been back there, Glow. And I won’t go if they go.”
Glow stared at the other girl. Sunset, or her two friends? She glanced to Sparkle, who looked just as confused and worried. Finally, she turned to Shining and Cadence. “I… I’m sorry to ask this, especially after all you have done for me, but...”
“No, she’s the better choice,” Cadence said with a sigh. “And she’s right. We’d likely just get in the way.”
“What? But we were going to be awesome!” Shining objected, before Cadence elbowed him in the side. “Ow! I mean, yeah, you’re probably right. Just… stay safe. Okay, Twily?”
Glow nodded and took a deep breath. She then turned to face Sunset, giving a weak smile. “I’m ready, I think.”
“Okay. And your plan?”
“Alert Nightmare Moon. Its been a few days, she’d have to be back by now. And… once I do… hope she’s not been drained enough Chrysalis can stop her.”
Sunset nodded, before reaching out her hand. “Come on, then, lets go.”
Glow nodded and took the hand before the two stepped into the portal together.
Ohhhh Sunset. I want to trust you, but boooooy do Inot trust you. Youre probably using this as an opportunity to see if you can grab power. Maybe take the throne for yourself. I hope Im wrong, but... well, we all know how good Sunset was at manipulating and playing nice while driving a wedge between friends, and it’s just too hard to imagine that one verbal beatdown changed her whole attitude towards life in a few days’ time.
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Can't be any worse really. Sunset is prideful, knowledgeable. Hopefully she doesn't end up drained or in the dungeons.
Still expecting Shining and Cadance to come through at the last second, wobbling as they try to walk on hooves, to save the day.
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Yep. I can picture her betraying Twilight so that she can work for Nightmare Moon, then doing Nightmare Moon's corrupt biding (unlike Glow, I doubt Sunset would lose sleep over Nightmare's ruthlessness), while searching for a way to overthrow her.
Hmmmm.... I don't trust Sunset at all, I know gave her a ver passionate speech about everything going on in Equestria, but something seems very off about her joining Glow to save their home.... I hope I'm wrong...
I feel that a good verbal beat down will help sunset but not put her completely on the right track but if she sees Celestia I believe she might have a change of heart
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I'm not concerned about Sunset, actually. She probably is[ doing this out of a sense of duty to Equestria, just a little bit. Tiny, little bit.
Tiny duty.
The ship with Celestia has seemingly set sail, and Sunset's not stupid; once Nightmare finds out the whole story, she'll never trust Sunset enough to let her anywhere close to a position of power. Never mind that Nightmare could easily divine Sunset's intentions, whatever they are. No, if anything, Nightmare will see this as an opportunity; an entire other world with no magic in it whatsoever. What better place to serve as a dumping ground for undesireables? She can put them somewhere where they can't threaten her rule or amass any kind of power to oppose her, and she doesn't have to kill them, which will keep her bard happy.
Heck, she might even think to employ Sunset as a kind of warden. Supply her with some gold and such to keep tabs on things there. Oh ho, this is just the best day ever!
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I'm less concerned about Sunset trying to work with Nightmare Moon, and more concerned with her using the current situation to dethrone both Chrysalis and Nightmare Moon. If she sees this as an opportunity to grab the throne during the confusion, she might think that she can come across as a hero by helping defeat Chrysalis and then maybe ALSO taking down a possibly-weakened Nightmare Moon. Obviously this is utter foolishness - but Sunset, while quite intelligent, has proven to be a bit dumb when it comes to her obsession of taking what's rightfully "hers." So my bet is going towards that, and not so much towards her trying to get in good with Nightmare Moon. Of course, the question still remains of how she expects to raise the Sun again if she WERE to take over... but I have a feeling she is plenty confident enough in her own abilities to figure that out (she couldn't, but she's probably still confident she could).
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I can actually...picture that happening.
Yeah, to me, Sunset's biggest weakness (when she was mean) was her extreme arrogance. Her stupidest choices were the result of her believing herself to be the best, and it has nearly costed her dearly.
1) She had the nerve to demand power (both literal and physical) from her monarch. Sunset was lucky ONLY to be kicked out of the castle for such defiance. Celestia could've just had her locked up.
2) Instead of being subtle in her bullying, she made herself into public enemy number one at her school. If Twilight hadn't stepped in to offer her a chance, she might have been run out of the school completely.
3) Stealing an element of harmony. She assumed she could command the most powerful magic in Equestria despite not meeting the criteria, simply because of her talent. Does, she nearly lost control of herself, and nearly committed murder.
I imagine she might have the ability to manipulate and betray Twilight, only to bite off more than she can chew when dealing both Chrysalis and Nightmare Moon. For extra karma, Nightmare could punish Sunset so harshly, that she'll be begging for Celestia's tender mercy.
I don’t trust Sunset... but they need the firepower and she will have to deal with the lings before any plans of her own.
And Sunset was never that awful, magic psychosis aside. Manipulative jerk yes, ambitious sure, but still having good under the surface. It’s not like the elements completely changed who she was.
Heh, it would be a funny/sad twist if Sunset betrays Twilight and Nightmare Moon out of loyalty to Celestia. Take the opportunity to defeat the usurper and her collaborator right hand mare. Save Equestria, free Celestia, and prove her worth. And be rewarded like she always deserved of course, though that might actually be secondary.
......Sunset is going to steal some magical artifacts isn't she?
So ... options:
1. Wait 5 minutes for Sunset and Glow to go through, and leave the portal way. Go through, get some practice walking around, and then see if they can do anything. After all, they can just head home if there's a problem, right?
Well, no. This portal takes time to recover/recharge. That didn't bother the EqG portal -- Sunset came over, stole something, and left, and Twilight went through very quickly. Heck, was able to put her arm back through, and see the pony limb.
So, it will be multiple days before the cavalry can come through to help.