Mantis Xanthous is entering a new world at Canterlot College. Many dangers lurk around the halls of the prestigious school especially for a Changeling. He will need to keep his head down and his wits sharp if he wishes to escape the wrath of a Queen.
A virtual reality RPG adventure and our protagonist, Mantis, is a political prisoner/student. This story seems interesting. Still, I have a question. Why did Rarity glared/forced AJ into joining the game? You have a fav and a like.
So we now have a new story to join with your others(I'm starting to see a pattern with your stories). Not much to give a review, just to point out a few things.
Rarity looked up at the eye patch wearing man and did her best not to mention it.
You didn't mentioned he had an eye patch earlier, and if he's using a illusion spell why have one in the first place?
“Not a problem at all dear.” She smiled. Twilight then noticed Locust.
This one does intrigues me, especially how your describing this world with how much the relationship between Humans and Changelings are the same as it was years ago during the times of desegregation between the whites and blacks.
An interesting idea. Loving the start so far. It's like two stories in one, you have the RPG element and the real world affairs. Looking forward for more.
Another story.
I can only expect quality work from you.
And you didn't dissapoint.
I need MOAR!
Oh sorry. It's just, this is some pretty good stuff.
one of the legendary authors of FIM fictions is back. I loved it. Keep it up my friend.
The beginning interview sounded similar to the way Ospin spoke when he interviewed the girls in RWBY
6905429 Yes it did.
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The ending had a Sword Art Online Reference. And I'm glad to see that you're back in the saddle. Long time fan of your work.
A virtual reality RPG adventure and our protagonist, Mantis, is a political prisoner/student. This story seems interesting. Still, I have a question. Why did Rarity glared/forced AJ into joining the game? You have a fav and a like.
how often are you thinking of updating it or are you just going to put out a chapter when it's finished
just curious
Seems interesting..... We are patiently waiting for the next Chapter.
Keep the good work up!!
So we now have a new story to join with your others(I'm starting to see a pattern with your stories). Not much to give a review, just to point out a few things.
You didn't mentioned he had an eye patch earlier, and if he's using a illusion spell why have one in the first place?
This one does intrigues me, especially how your describing this world with how much the relationship between Humans and Changelings are the same as it was years ago during the times of desegregation between the whites and blacks.
An interesting idea. Loving the start so far. It's like two stories in one, you have the RPG element and the real world affairs. Looking forward for more.
i hope you continue this story its really good
6905856 Just whenever the next one is finished.
6905631 To pressure her into getting the game so the whole group was in it. All or nothing.
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Um... it's Ozpin, with a "z."
More please and good job keep it up see you next chapter