Dear Trixie

by LunaFinna and Singheart

CHAPTER SIX: The final chapter to book one....

Since the disappearance of Trixie's dad, she thought life was over.... Then her mother died from Celestia. That's why her life was originally ruined. Every thing happens to her! but now, she ran from the castle, the tiny yellow Pegasus in a magical floating fortress. Trixie held on to her for dear life. She had to hide the baby from Celestia as well as from every.... She couldn't think right then. She stopped at a cottage near the Everfree Forest. she knocked, and no pony answered, so she ran through the door.

She found the house had a weird smokey smell. She ransacked the house, looking for a bed to set Fluttershy on. The house had a small room. She set the foal on the bed, and the walls seemed to cave in.... The wall fell on top of Trixie. She landed on the floor with a small bang of the head.The floor had a puddle of crimson on it. The bed started to set a flame. the baby was flown safely to a tree by Trixie's last puff of magic was squeezed out of her like water a popped water balloon. And with that, Trixie was left alone in the burning cottage, the cartilage and screaming ridiculously terrifying. The house burned down, and Trixie....

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Comments

[Harmony Pie]

Maybe it would be better if you put more detail into the short summary? Saying it is a sadfic doesn't really seperate it from the others

[LunaFinna and Singheart]

Harmony Pie Thank you for suggestions I will remember that for future stories by the way your stories are pretty good!

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i watch you in your sleep

[LunaFinna and Singheart]

Imma destroy u bcause i know u hueueueueueue

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hissssss no one knows me i an a bold pony

[LunaFinna and Singheart]

I know ur name and where u live.... hdueueueueuueueue also do not report me because i am friend with u

[LunaFinna and Singheart]

Jominetine Thank you for the advice

[LunaFinna and Singheart]

7195907 Thank you, again