Just an average fan who enjoys reading and writing fan fiction.
Spitfire has only had her mother and friends. So what happens when somepony unexpected comes into her life and changes everything? The answer is everything. Furthermore can Spitfire handle the betrayal that she has been faced with and how will she come to terms with it all.
On Hiatus because of college, work, Air cadets, and other commitments. I will eventually start this up again as i hate leaving it on a cliff hanger.
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There were other sentences which had the same mistake. And....
The capitalizations are quite missed, and the commas after every sentence of the speakers.
All in all, I don't see any other more complications.
I'm already intrigued about Spitfire's past.
It's awesome, Blizz. Write mooooore!
Thanks flutters My word processor likes farther insted of father
Haha but thanks for the feedback. 
Furthermore I already have the past with Spitfires parents planned out as you can see from the fractured flash back. 
later on for the sheer fun of it as well. Haha given that pegasi are 'light weights' haha
And I've always had a bit of a caps problem whoops.
I still don't know how long this will last but I hope it will last for at least 10k words.
I'm thinking about including that drinking scene
Thanks again flutters
-Blizz
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Howdy, Blizz, dear!
Oh, I see. 10k sounds good. I wonder how will you put all those scenes with that word count.
Oh, well.
Good luck and have fun with writin'! Relax, sit back and don't ever have that most feared, writer's block.
6850660 well as I said I'll write when I can as I have college most of the week and work can be random sometimes so writing will be my escape when I have time free.