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Compass The Pegasus

When you're feeling low, I will be there too


After losing a bet, Soarin is forced by his friends to spill the well kept secret of how he met the love of his life at the Wonderbolt Academy.

Proofread and edited by my good friend Pseudobob Delightus
Cover Art by the wonderful Little Tigress

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 15 )

Oh I’ll have to get to this one a little later

Oh boy. Soarin is down bad tremendously. I wonder what kind trouble he'll get himself into next...

Anyway, it was a lot of fun helping out with this. Nice work!

Interesting start!

This is off to a great start.

"We will watch your career with great interest"

It's Soarin' with an apostrophe.

Can't wait for the next chapter i love it

I was hoping that competency would be Spitfire's redeeming quality, but even that now seems in doubt

Not yet, they've both got a lot to learn.

I will admit: I have a bit of a hard time imagining Spitfire falling apart into a crying mess, but I'm reminding myself that this is before she becomes the hardass she is now.

Plus, I'm a sucker for Soarinfire anyway, so I'll be keeping an eye on this one. I have a good feeling about this one.

I guess I didn't make it super clear, but Soarin and Spitfire both are probably just about 20ish in this part of the story. They are very young and inexperienced.
By the time that Soarin is telling the story in the bar, they're in their late 20s, approaching 30.

Anyway, thanks for reading!

This is amazing!! Please keep up with this story, it has so much potential and i’m dying to see what happens next!! 🙏🏻🙏🏻

Chapter 3 is done and is just going through edits! I'm hoping to have it published within the next 10 days.
Thanks for reading!

Good to see this continue. Also good to see Spitfire and Soarin maybe not being so terrible after all? Only time will tell, but I imagine they've still got plenty of idiot left in them.

Anyway, completing these chapters was a little rough, but as the saying goes - no pain, no gain.

As it’s been while, I reread the story.
Chapter two is feeling good.
Chapter 3 felt short but has been a real fun read.
It’s nice to see that things are turning around.
I did get a laugh out of their friends getting real friendly…

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