next update please and don't get sick please hope you get better

While I'm still not entirely convinced by this story so far, I must say this is getting better and better with each chapter.
You seem to be learning a lot from the comments, which is a great thing^^

If I had an advice...Most of the stuff happening feels rushed. Take more time to explain every situation and the characters' reactions, it will seems more fluid to the reader.
Keep going, I'm sure you can make a great story, you just need another chapter or two to perfect your writing.

Oh boy.... To Injured Ponys In some guys house, alone with him for a week with no parents. This Is Scary....

JK, Keep going DAMNIT!

I was hoping for a 'in your face dad' moment also I think that the parents didn't go to a honeymoon... not saying anymore for the fear of being right. But please update soon I really want to see that moment where his dad finds out that their real.
Final notes please no two relationships I keep finding them even when I think they're not one of them. (Fluttershy relationship please) now then I guess two more hours before I get up from a good nights 'rest'

inb4 they're actually plushies and he's gone insane.

I loved this chapter it was a sweet ant a awesome read .I can't wait to see what happens next to them all.