Yay! new update! And it's an awesome Daaawwww chapter too! Too bad it's so short but it's still a lovely piece of work. Thank you! I'm lookin forward to many more chapters
You're running into the same problem I once had with the use of contractions. Don't be afraid to use them, especially in dialogue where it makes the conversation more fluid sounding.
Yay! new update! And it's an awesome Daaawwww chapter too! Too bad it's so short but it's still a lovely piece of work. Thank you! I'm lookin forward to many more chapters
yea, this is one of the fics I read to get that happy warm feeling and relax, alot of my other fics are serious. Would love to see this more often.
Awesome.
aahhh finally! You know, I realy like Ponys on Earth Storys, but yours is the only one I found on Fim
But now your back!!!! good cpt, like the Twi read a DVD scene
Sweet chapter.
I SHALL SING FOR YOU THE SONG OF MY PEOPLE... even if it is fireflies...
You're running into the same problem I once had with the use of contractions. Don't be afraid to use them, especially in dialogue where it makes the conversation more fluid sounding.
This was a sweet and awesome read I loved it all. Ican' wait see what happens next to them all.
TWILIGHT THOUGHT A DVD WAS A BOOK!IM SORRY IM JUST CRACKING UP AT THAT!