I admit that I feel a little uncomfortable in this chapter, especially about Pinkie..

well..

Poor Pinkie.

And now it can only get worse

I have a feeling this will blow hard in rainbows face and Princess Celestia will have to come and clean things up, Though I doubt that will happen with this being an ALICORN Twilight grade disaster this time.

YEAH that was a dick move rainbow i get random strangers but not a friend you know has possible mental stability problems

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Spike writes a letter to Celestia saying Twilight's possessed by the Nightmare in 3... 2...

But really, she just had an extreme OCD attack and the attempts to satisfy it are finally breaking all of her repressed feelings loose. They'll find out it was all a bet, get Twilight a therapist so she can learn how to vent safely, and they'll all move on.

Before or after trying to Tactical Rainbow Nuke her, though, is the question

Or that's what I think, anyway.

it's beautiful! almost perfect, but missing something... it's right on the top of my head...

OF COURSE!

TATTOOS!!! TWILIGHT NEEDS TATTOOS!!!!!!

6756452 Why? She already has a magical tramp stamps on her flanks.

Being cruel to Pinkie isn't really the same as not caring about the rules...

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Which is what most people get wrong nowadays.

There's breaking regulation, and then there's being a total ####bag.

An entertainingly wrong mess up that happens more often than you think.

6756452 No. what she needs is a Collar. Another one. To put on Rainbow, with a Leash. Then she can walk her little pet through town without a care. Maybe push her into the bushes of the park and have her way with her too, if the mood strikes her. It will be Glorious

I kinda hope at some point Twi realizes the way she is acting remindes her of somepony... , Sunset Shimmer, Diamond Tiara or even from Putting Your Hoof Down
(We really need more pony emotes.)

MfG NIchtraucher

PS: Oh yeah, I like the story. Can't wait to see how all this escalates even more.

MY EYEBALL IS SEE THE TALE. WHILE READING UPON, MY EYE IS ITCH. THE EYE IS SCRATCHED ON ACCIDENT. NO BAD FEELINGS FOR YOU.

THE STRORY HAS A QUALITY, MIGHT TO EVEN CALL IT ADEQUATE.

I'll just leave this here.

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I'm hoping that as time goes on, she begins to realize that she likes acting this way. like how people on diets get a thrill from eating sweets, she realizes that she gets a rush from acting this way. soon, she becomes addicted to it, and doesn't want to go back, eventually telling dash to fuck off when she tries to stop the bet in order to get twilight to go back to normal. she chews dash out the same way she did pinkie, and dash finally realizes what she has done to one of her best friends.

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and then begins trying to work it out.

EDIT: is it bad we are capable of literally predicting a story plot before it occurs?

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Gilda.

Rainbow Dash was used to Gilda's "#### ALL!" attitude, thus the encouragement of such here stems from that...

...even though Griffon The Brush-Off specifically detested doing any such replication of it, as Gilda was the antagonist.

...Aesop Amnesia?

Oh god... She made Pinkie cry

I wonder if this is going to end with Celestia and/or Luna being called and Twilight acting like a bitch to them. Or what if Shinning Armor and Cadence make a surprise visit!

That was a rude move, coming from Rainbow, I feel sorry for Pinkie...

6756859 I don't think so. i've turn it into a game. see how close my predictions came to the real thing. sometimes the author likes my ideas, and uses them either for inspiration or puts them directly in to the story.

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meh.

gg.

Great job RD. You've unleashed the beast that all the snark comes from but without any conscience or filter.

PONY WARS: THE PLOT AWAKENS

This is a BAD idea!

We all know this is gonna happen at some point and I can't wait to see it...Twilight meeting Celestia like this...

How dare you make Pinkie cry

But you should keep the mane cut

Also can you add a Comedy tag?

This will be a great story so long as you remember to give Twi and RD some comeuppance for being bitches all day.

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Not that good not that bad it's a story.

Meh. It's looking okay. Feel like the whole being an ass thing is not what Rainbow had in mind though and the worst part is that she isn't correcting it. If this was a different story she'd call it off right now and do her end of the bargain. Sadly it's going to drag this out.

I cant wait until twilight stops listening to rainbow dash and just starts doing shit cos she wants to

Rainbow are you sure you're making her tough and not turning her into the Persona 3 Protagonist Makoto Yuki? Because she's kind of acting like him right now.

This chapter made me feel slightly better. Like, first completely throw me of my hooves (for no reason, thought), and i was even contemplating if i wanna read farther. Well, this chapter smothered this feeling a bit (not that I'm happy about Pinkie incident).
See you tomorrow.

6754513 Finally someone else who has heard of interrobangs. Even the spellchecker doesn't know about them.

This is going to get worse isn't it? First pinkie...NOW DO THE REST! Really hoping celestia or luna turns up. This is going to be fun and sad at the time lol.

You're gonna need more than "whatever", Twi. How bout a good slap on your plot and some raunchy comments?

This story is f_cking good. I need more.

6756528 i mean MORE tattoos... something along the lines of THIS:

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and here, we have the wild Rainbow Dash create a MONSTER out of the series' main character.... it's only going to go downhill

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... and tattoos.

She couldn’t explain why but when Rainbow tightened it and caused her a small amount of difficulty in breathing, it felt… liberating, in a way.

I know the feeling. Its great, ain't it? Though the constant use of "Whatever" can get annoying and plain.

I hope the story ends with lesbian ponies

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Was that in doubt? Lol

6758353 Not any more

Twilight as a 'bad girl'... let's hope she doesn't turn HARDCORE.

Is it me or does Twilight look Asian in the cover art? I've come here just to ask that question and I admit right now it's pretty pathetic I'm here for that reason.

But can I get an answer anyway?

I am just waiting to play this song when reading Bad Twilight doing her shit. When she gets bad.

Dang! She made Pinkie cry

I can tell that I will enjoy this.

I'm a monster! I'm actually liking bad twi...

“What‽ No! We had a bet,”

I spy the interrobang