Please don't post incomplete chapters. I can accept shorter chapters and I can accept unedited chapters, but I can't stand intentionally incomplete ones.
Comment posted by NeutronStar deleted Dec 21st, 2015
i knew the opening text was a dream description from it's font , but i also knew it was from the writing itself , but whatever it was good enough for me XD ......
Chief let out a loud whinny as he reached his climax.
His thick, warm cum shot out of his cock like a hose, spraying all over Sunset Shimmer.
Sunset got HOSED ! ( Now I'm in heat ! ) A poem I wrote : I'm a mare in heeeeat and I need my meeeeat A nice pony's diiiick would taste sweeeeet Xenamare
Yes, first.
Short and sweet, Sunset still has to do all of the work.
How did Aj not hear that?
Why doth thou tease us so?
Well looks like it has to wait. I'm fine with waiting.
Ooh boy
Maybe i should go to sleep now...
This is getting too weird, even for me
Clocks about three am, here in finland. ...
Please don't post incomplete chapters. I can accept shorter chapters and I can accept unedited chapters, but I can't stand intentionally incomplete ones.
Sunset should tell them now or Pinkie Sense will do it for her.
ops was that suppose to happen?
hum I think sunset was a bit eager.
good chapter.
You mix present and past tense arbitrarily.
I do not like.
(I advise you keep all stories in the past tense; present tense is a hard way to write a story)
Sure enough, Chief's member had already begun to expand rapidly. Sunset watched with awe as she horse's cock grew more and more.
Improper grammar
i knew the opening text was a dream description from it's font , but i also knew it was from the writing itself , but whatever it was good enough for me XD ......
Sunset got HOSED !
( Now I'm in heat ! )
A poem I wrote :
I'm a mare in heeeeat
and I need my meeeeat
A nice pony's diiiick
would taste sweeeeet
Xenamare
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I’m flattered you enjoyed my story so much. Feel free to read the sequel stories that follow this one. I hope you’ll enjoy them too.
6748550I'm a "Nightmare" and I enjoy reading stories like this . It's 3:05 am in the U.S. Georgia