6753123 I second that*hops in a shower* rainbow: um...what are you doing in here? Crap! Sorry!*goes to hop out but gets grabbed * rainbow: oh no! Your staying here!
Enjoying the story, but got a bit confused when I started reading Chapter 3 without realising you'd gone back and added a second half to Chapter 2. FimFiction lets me know when a story I'm tracking has a new chapter added, it doesn't let me know when a chapter gets a massive re-write. Could I please request that in future, you try to avoid posting incomplete chapters? Please either wait until a chapter is finished, or break it down into smaller chapters. Thanks.
6753933 The incomplete chapter release was a one time deal. I was pressed for time due to work and the new Star Wars movie, so I tied what writing I had done on the second chapter as cleanly as I could and released it anyway. All chapters in the future will be released as complete works, at least 2000 words each.
OH I AM SO HORNY !!! I'm a mare in HEAT and I need that Meat ! Oh I am so JEALOUS ! They get to play with Chief and I'm setting in my wet panty's reading this ! Oh, it is a cruel cruel world !
I totally call that.
ok that just got super hot. wow cold shower needed.
6753123 I second that*hops in a shower*
rainbow: um...what are you doing in here?
Crap! Sorry!*goes to hop out but gets grabbed *
rainbow: oh no! Your staying here!
Enjoying the story, but got a bit confused when I started reading Chapter 3 without realising you'd gone back and added a second half to Chapter 2.
FimFiction lets me know when a story I'm tracking has a new chapter added, it doesn't let me know when a chapter gets a massive re-write.
Could I please request that in future, you try to avoid posting incomplete chapters? Please either wait until a chapter is finished, or break it down into smaller chapters.
Thanks.
6753933 The incomplete chapter release was a one time deal. I was pressed for time due to work and the new Star Wars movie, so I tied what writing I had done on the second chapter as cleanly as I could and released it anyway. All chapters in the future will be released as complete works, at least 2000 words each.
how soon till we get to see the next chapter of this really well written and very well made story?
Is it wrong that I actually like this?
6818975
Here, no no it isn't. Wouldn't say much outside fandom though.
"He... He's so big..." She gasped, panting heavily.
4:40
Wow, kinda surprised.
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I hope it’s a good ‘surprised’.
OH I AM SO HORNY !!!
I'm a mare in HEAT and I need that Meat !
Oh I am so JEALOUS ! They get to play with Chief and I'm setting in my wet panty's reading this !
Oh, it is a cruel cruel world !