7 human beings are sent to Equestria one night. With no known way to return, they could be stuck there. How will they fit into the storyline?
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Poor Nightmare Moon!
Ah the opening theme song called all star from the first Shrek movie, it never gets old and I laughed too hard from Nightmare's bad crazy day. It's also funny again to Twilight and her friends got pranked and troll every time.
try to color the ponies, in more intenses colors its dificult to read
I'm just gonna point out one thing I don't like about this chapter. Twilight won't let Spike come celebrate her birthday at Canterlot, but she's totally OK with Jeff of all people coming along? That just doesn't seem right to me.
What he did to nightmare moon........ Priceless anyway keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter!
7523201 You know, believe it or not, that kind've irked me too when I watched 'Sweet and Elite', and several more times while writing the chapter. However, an idea came to me involving Spike and Jonathan. That's all I will say.
R-U-T-T-I-N-G!
(I'll admit that my Japanese has gotten a bit rusty, and I had to use Google Translate to figure out the last word.)
Thus, Xavier channels his inner Sans.
7523174 It's better read with a dark background, as said last chapter. I'll go on and put a warning at the top.
I wanna see more nightmare bashing
Shrek is love, Shrek is life
I wonder how the mane 6 will react if they learn of nightmare moon
A good chapter. The only thing I had an issue with was you having a link to the song and then typing in the song with brakes. It just messes with my head a bit.
7523933 Yeah, sorry about that. There won't be too much of that in the future anyway.
7523954 If you have it on the default background, yes it will be hard to read. However, I put a warning near the top of the chapter to darken your background via formatting so you'd be able to read the chapters.
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Haha, love this chapter!
Bismilla we will no let you go!
7610082 That was a mistake on my part that he caught.
I'm not past this chapter yet, but will there be an actual sex scene later on? You've done a great job at describing things so far, so I think you'd do great with one. Just saying. Amazing story!
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I wouldn't hold your breath. The sex will most likely be implied or mentioned (hence the sex tag) until I muster the will to actually type out the actual details from everything that goes on, which frankly might not happen seeing as I'd much rather move on to the next story/chapter/episode/scene. Might change my mind, might not.
ROFLMAO Oh Sweet Celestia that's just hilarious!! I can't believe you did that! *lifts a glass to you*